My First FB in Flash

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Jan 20, 2010 9:52 PM #539018
http://ifoshizzle.deviantart.com/art/First-FB-in-Flash-151134231

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Jan 20, 2010 9:53 PM #539019
I love it .
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Jan 20, 2010 9:58 PM #539024
Thank you bro .
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Jan 21, 2010 2:56 AM #539150
I'm guessing you're using the line tool for the outlines until you get used to drawing in Flash?
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Jan 21, 2010 6:13 AM #539223
Yes. I'm not using a tablet and it's way too scribbly to draw with the brush tool for now. I will use the line tool untill I get a tablet.
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Jan 21, 2010 2:37 PM #539272
You will rock flash! [ROCK]
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Jan 21, 2010 2:48 PM #539275
Thanks :D
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Jan 21, 2010 4:23 PM #539288
Damn awesome considering its your first one, the lines make sense, you're very talented, the only thing that ruins the whole thing is the blood, its not really blood, its some kind of floating red something..

Good pose for the "covering" right before he punches, interesting drawing style, I really like that, but you might have hard time putting this into color and giving it more detail, but ! This is far far away, just practice, I really like this, great job.
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Jan 21, 2010 4:29 PM #539289
Thank you Tawnik, I don't know what happened to the blood though.. It seemed to be alot better in flash D: I'll fix it some other time.
I'm just going to practice using the line tool untill I get a good tablet, so till then I won't use any detail on my FB's.
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Jan 23, 2010 6:55 PM #539969
the victim: his arms were a bit choppy...
the puncher: very good. i couldnt find any major flaws
very good for a first FB
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Jan 24, 2010 3:25 AM #540069
Anticipation needs to happen. It would look way better if he brought back his arm before the punch. I like it though. nice stuff.
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Jan 24, 2010 6:33 AM #540105
Thanks .