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Jan 21, 2010 10:42 PM #539376
http://www.truploader.com/view/661366

Heres my first comic I know it isn't good. Anyways C&C!
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Jan 21, 2010 11:15 PM #539390
i dont get it ...
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Jan 21, 2010 11:24 PM #539393
Ok ok let me explain.

Then Alien is walking to the parking lot to get his car. So while he's walking he passes the gas station. There a man is putting gasoline into the mans UFO. So after the alien gets to his car he calls him a weirdo for having a UFO. Yea it's hard to understand sorry.
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Jan 21, 2010 11:28 PM #539394
I understood it clearly, despite the artwork being quite bad and the joke not really being funny at all to me.
However, you should keep practising. Maybe tidy up the layout, and make the artwork seem a lot less cluttered.
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Jan 22, 2010 12:09 AM #539401
Well it is my first ever comic so yeah but still thanks for the C&C.
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