http://ifoshizzle.deviantart.com/art/Smokes-Man-Flash-151342317

CnC this time pl0x :c

I love your style. Finally someone with something unique.
Everything was perfect, though I find the last part a bit confusing.

Thanks, the last part was the result of me being too lazy to finish it. :D

There really is nothing to criticize :/
Clean up the lines?

I didn't find it that amusing at all.

Lolk .

This Was ****ing Shit, I Want To Rinse My Eyes With My Own Feces. Arch Angel Aggreees Im On The Mic With Him. This Is Actually Him Vile Went For A Piss And Left Team Viewer On Hes A Gay Faggot Vile Is Cunt Balls Dick Wad.

Impressive, you should learn more camera techniques. Such as, instead of having everything change so fast, you can make things go slower by pausing and zooming in or zooming out, add cinematic effects.

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Impressive, you should learn more camera techniques. Such as, instead of having everything change so fast, you can make things go slower by pausing and zooming in or zooming out, add cinematic effects.

Thanks bro, I'm currently trying to learn some camera movements and 3-Dish effects :D

I'd work on the basics first, friend.

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I'd work on the basics first, friend.

Your not being helpfull at all dude. If your just gonna wright shit like thAT then fu*c off. go find somthing else compleatly pointless to spend a few years wasting your life on.

ontopic.

that was kool man ^_^

really like your style. Just looked a bit rushed at the end. KEEP IT UP I must see more

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Your not being helpfull at all dude. If your just gonna wright shit like thAT then fu*c off. go find somthing else compleatly pointless to spend a few years wasting your life on.

ontopic.

that was kool man ^_^

really like your style. Just looked a bit rushed at the end. KEEP IT UP I must see more

Lol definitely because I don't know what I'm talking about right?
I forgot that the people that mentored me told me to quit doing shit such as effects and experimenting with other shit because it will only make it take longer to get good.

If you master the basics, you can animate anything if you're willing to put the time to into it. You're ****ing stupid if you don't think I'm helping. If anything I'm trying to save him time. If he can do basic movements such as walking, running, jumping, if he can ease perfectly and masters physics then he defiantly cannot do a ****ing bad ass explosion.

If he jumps into effects and shit and tries all of these hard techniques before he has any clue what makes an animation good or how to actually animate then he's going to make shit animations that faggots such as yourself think are good.

You're all the same. You retards go around leaving comments like "OMFG DAT WAS FUKN SWEEEET!!!111!!!!!11111!! Make more dude you're seriously good", and I'm looking at an animation that looks like someone shit on 30 frames and uploaded it :/ Now there's a faggot who doesn't know what he's talking about, and a faggot who thinks he's amazing at animating because he's going to get 10 people who have no idea what they're talking about think his animations are good, against someone like myself who is actually good and knows what they're talking about.

Learn to take criticism. "Work on basics" shouldn't have to be explained in 5 paragraphs of individual areas that were bad in the animation. Everyone should know what the basics are, and chances are if you messed up with something as simple as a run, you're going to mess other movements and easing patterns up.

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I love your style. Finally someone with something unique.
Everything was perfect, though I find the last part a bit confusing.

Nothing about this post is true.
No one on this forum has or will ever make a flawless animation. Yours was far from it. Posts like this are going to give you an accomplished feeling, so you're going to keep animating the same and not get better.

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Thanks, the last part was the result of me being too lazy to finish it. :D

Excuses. I've heard them all and laziness if by far the most pathetic.

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Impressive, you should learn more camera techniques. Such as, instead of having everything change so fast, you can make things go slower by pausing and zooming in or zooming out, add cinematic effects.

You shouldn't do anything in this post. You're going to eventually have an amazing camera effect, but you're characters are going to look retarded. Visual effects and presentation should be worried about once you have a good grasp on what you're doing.

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Thanks bro, I'm currently trying to learn some camera movements and 3-Dish effects :D

Why would you learn 3-D effects when you cannot even do 2-D effects?
My point exactly. You're trying to do too much and it's going to take longer until you're decent.

Arch-Angel is right, I can sign everything that he said but one thing.This is very solid animation.Its going to be really good if you wont spam us with your animations as you do it now, there are like 5 topics in this section that are yours :| Take your time, now I realized that NO ONE wants to see the unfinished stuff (unless you're new to the whole concept of animation and you want to see how its done) if you want to help with something then yeah, create an work in progress section, if you want to hear some comments then link your friends, but theres no need to post every animation you make, take your time and make something long and good, people will respect you more then ;) Well now you're pretty actice, which is a really good thing, but you should do longer stuff.
The actual animation was nice, I like the poses, it really goes well, I like the way they move.It suits this style, but when you'd like to move to something else I guess you'd have difficulties with easing.Your timing seems pretty good, but Id like to see some bouncing balls, or falling boxes from you, just to be sure that you know how to threat these objects ;)
Great job though, i like it overall and as Aycaramba said "this is unique".

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Excuses. I've heard them all and laziness if by far the most pathetic.

Quote from Arch-Angel

did you seriously not think of that?
It's the easiest/laziest thing ever lol

Well F*ck.

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Arch-Angel is right, I can sign everything that he said but one thing.This is very solid animation.Its going to be really good if you wont spam us with your animations as you do it now, there are like 5 topics in this section that are yours :| Take your time, now I realized that NO ONE wants to see the unfinished stuff (unless you're new to the whole concept of animation and you want to see how its done) if you want to help with something then yeah, create an work in progress section, if you want to hear some comments then link your friends, but theres no need to post every animation you make, take your time and make something long and good, people will respect you more then ;) Well now you're pretty actice, which is a really good thing, but you should do longer stuff.
The actual animation was nice, I like the poses, it really goes well, I like the way they move.It suits this style, but when you'd like to move to something else I guess you'd have difficulties with easing.Your timing seems pretty good, but Id like to see some bouncing balls, or falling boxes from you, just to be sure that you know how to threat these objects ;)
Great job though, i like it overall and as Aycaramba said "this is unique".

Thank you Tawnik, I'll be sure to post something alot longer next time. With random falling objects. :P