My best flash yet

Started by: zer0gravity | Replies: 22 | Views: 1,842

zer0gravity
2

Posts: 490
Joined: Oct 2009
Rep: 10

View Profile
Feb 2, 2010 9:05 AM #542833
just spent a while making this.

http://www.truploader.com/view/664274

C&C plz
zer0gravity
2

Posts: 490
Joined: Oct 2009
Rep: 10

View Profile
Feb 2, 2010 12:16 PM #542855
EDIT!!!

fixed head!
FoShizzle
2

Posts: 2,524
Joined: Jun 2007
Rep: 10

View Profile
Feb 2, 2010 1:12 PM #542858
The Physics are quite wrong, and it seems your movements are choppy and kind of stiff. Just look at how you jump or punch in real life, your whole body moves. not only your upper body. Work on that and it will be excellent.
Also, the effects were nice :)
zer0gravity
2

Posts: 490
Joined: Oct 2009
Rep: 10

View Profile
Feb 2, 2010 7:59 PM #542907
='[

ok... I wasn't trying to make the moves look real btw
Airec
2

Posts: 20
Joined: May 2006
Rep: 10

View Profile
Feb 3, 2010 1:16 AM #542997
more anticipation for the moves would help, especially those crazy kicks. Maybe have him bend his knees a little more or really draw back his weight and arch his back before he attacks. The two heavy punches in the middle feel pretty nice though.
zer0gravity
2

Posts: 490
Joined: Oct 2009
Rep: 10

View Profile
Feb 3, 2010 2:04 AM #543005
thank you ^_^
Vendetta

Posts: 1,238
Joined: Oct 2009
Rep: 10

View Profile
Feb 3, 2010 4:11 AM #543033
I loved the effects, but some of the moves could've had more anticipation; it just jumps from one place to another. The physics were okay, but you might want to pay attention to emphasizing them more. Again, I loved the trails, but I think they would look better if they lasted longer.
zer0gravity
2

Posts: 490
Joined: Oct 2009
Rep: 10

View Profile
Feb 3, 2010 4:34 AM #543035
thanks...
I made them last as long as they could...
Flood
2

Posts: 3,326
Joined: Dec 2008
Rep: 10

View Profile
Feb 3, 2010 5:46 AM #543050
i really loved the first kick but then the rest seemed lazy in my opinion. try to be more consistent through your animations, and try just as hard on every part. that and what everyone else said
降世神通

Posts: 69
Joined: Nov 2009
Rep: 10

View Profile
Feb 3, 2010 5:52 AM #543051
Cool, especially that the dust
zer0gravity
2

Posts: 490
Joined: Oct 2009
Rep: 10

View Profile
Feb 3, 2010 7:02 AM #543070
Quote from Flood
i really loved the first kick but then the rest seemed lazy in my opinion. try to be more consistent through your animations, and try just as hard on every part. that and what everyone else said


I did try as hard on every part =S

oh well.... It seems my best anim is shit........
doc

Posts: 1,127
Joined: Jan 2009
Rep: 10

View Profile
Feb 3, 2010 8:54 PM #543243
na, it overall is a pretty good animation. Its just that ppl tend to only say the bad in the CC (myself included). The effects were great imo. The physics were a little weird, but it gave me this spacee kinda feeling, like it was on the moon or something. There was a little resizing when he was upside down, but not that noticable. I thought the movements were definitely solid, and i like how you added the fists and a slight curve to the arm, it made it more... better. lol
zer0gravity
2

Posts: 490
Joined: Oct 2009
Rep: 10

View Profile
Feb 3, 2010 10:09 PM #543260
yay!!! :D

thanks ^_^.
FoShizzle
2

Posts: 2,524
Joined: Jun 2007
Rep: 10

View Profile
Feb 3, 2010 10:10 PM #543261
Don't get me wrong Zero, i didn't say it sucked. It was great :)
kixen2
2

Posts: 126
Joined: Jul 2007
Rep: 10

View Profile
Feb 4, 2010 1:03 AM #543308
The movements were okay, but could use a little work, the dust particles, well there were some particles that appeared from nowhere like odd lines appearing outside the dust line, that didnt make much sense. And i found the dust itself quite unneccesary <--(spelt wrong) Anyway it wasn't tpp bad, just fix up the movements, make it a bit longer, bump up the framerate and you'd have a pretty good animation.