Moch12 you need to rebut me.

Quote from OGrilla

A master of disaster, destruction runnin right past your
Eyes. Vision blurrin as I'm turnin it upside down faster
Than you can adjust. And your world is now distrust.
What other horrors have I got in store? But you must
Hold onto this dream that whatever it may seem,
I'm really runnin out of lines. Now people you deem
To be worthy of worship. I've smelled better horse shit
And would rather a cup between two whores split.
Blood drippin on your toes, comin from your nose
Should be sittin in the high rise seats but no you chose
To battle with the wiry, yet stout and stocky rhyming king
Man I got an english, law, and animation house degree.
It shouldn't be surprising, but my talents they are rising
As I send these blocks of text across a new horizon.
Tried a few times before, but now I'm growing bored
Of the challenge, so try to make me bow again, Lord.
I'm sorry to say, but I'm here to take your points away
So Gavel, bring home one more verse and let it lay.

My patience is Denver air: it's growing thin
Of this welterweight rapper trying to match my Forrest Griffin
Lyrical style, this's gone on a while now time to finish this
I'm Google in this game while you're Circuit City: Out of business
These rhymes make you look like Moe Greene
Lose sight of this game while I take you out coldly
Your house degree is nothing when I'm on the mic
I burn a verse and leave you looking -22 Fahrenheit
And stiff as a board from this gift that I horde
Although the pen is mighty, I think I'll go with the sword
'Cause I'm sharp tongued, I dissect you with my speech
And sell your slices in the supermarket for 5 cents each
Because you're not worth my time or my effort
I rise above you in this game like an NBA center
Let's have a moment of silence as I end this verse
Because there goes OG's MC status in the back of that hearse

directed to Dinomut
Errr Thankfully I know what that means......Ill try my best.
But I dont exactly you know
Ryhme like you.
It seems like you put your guts in those letters........
So Ill try but Im gonna be ranking on you
Sorry
:T

Well I godda reboot
the ryhmes are gonna go ape wall
About twice as tall,as what seems to be
My rappin destiny,so I hear by decree
you godda do more than ryhme,
YOu godda walk up them steps,
But take your time,we dont want a mess,
Because this will be your road to success,dont stress
The road ahead will be dark and filled trouble,
But youve godda be ready to Rumble,with destiny
dont stumble,or fumble, this wont be an ecstasy
Just fight to the top,and gain your place
Or Ill rip your face
In 2

lol
That's all ive got your turn :3

NOTE:
Ecstasy means cup of tea
lol

Quote from Gavel

My patience is Denver air: it's growing thin
Of this welterweight rapper trying to match my Forrest Griffin
Lyrical style, this's gone on a while now time to finish this
I'm Google in this game while you're Circuit City: Out of business
These rhymes make you look like Moe Greene
Lose sight of this game while I take you out coldly
Your house degree is nothing when I'm on the mic
I burn a verse and leave you looking -22 Fahrenheit
And stiff as a board from this gift that I horde
Although the pen is mighty, I think I'll go with the sword
'Cause I'm sharp tongued, I dissect you with my speech
And sell your slices in the supermarket for 5 cents each
Because you're not worth my time or my effort
I rise above you in this game like an NBA center
Let's have a moment of silence as I end this verse
Because there goes OG's MC status in the back of that hearse

I'll give this a shot and put eight in your hot head,
Still spittin half-dead, dark face turnin red.
Bringin heat you say, put that sword away.
What, you see yourself still standin up today?
My taste is acquired: your lines are so tired.
Usin every reference you can yet still mired
In your old ways. Lookin to sink your hook in
A fat catch of laughs but my lines send you bookin
It. Cookin it away, all the children here to stay
And watch this tame man make you pray.
I see your demise deep within your own eyes,
The bottomless pits in which you stash your lies.
But when I kill you and grill you
In a spit with my sick shit twisted I'll still thrill you.
Can't escape from this vise, a grip I have devised
To shove my cold-hearted rhymes deep into your eyes.

Quote from Moch12

O.k I guess Ill make my first lyrical statement that made sense in this thread...
This is focused on Jutsu....Then Ill work on what's his face.

O.k
alright
you rap like your mom rough and heavy
But I laugh at the fact how Im swift and steady
with the my beats
That bring people to there feat
Now you see
my ryhmes gonna kill like man slaughter
Rushin water
From you head after hearin mah rhymes
Like new times....
Hmm
As a matter a fact
After readin yo ryhmes
I think there pretty wack. you try to stack little by little
kinda like an endless riddle
tryin to tell a story
you godda pull more out of your hat
You know your inventory.
you godda step up to bat
follow me alley cat
Youl learn how to pounce
how to catch...
Then youll learn how to rap.....

Err I guess this is o.k
Edit:
Wow ogrilla
That was awesome I liked the monster part :3

You try as hard as you can to take, my flows and rhymes won't give you a break.
For what sake, to you try and make a hip hop rhyme that isn't fake?
But you fail, up against the rhymes I entail, my words sail though your mind, like a wail to the ocean.
When I get speaking I am causing commotion, the notion that you will succeed.
Is just for naught, I proceed to be the cause of envy, not an M.C. but plausibly better than I seem to be.
It's me...

I can make, poets out of solders, I will liberate your head from your shoulders.
Though I must confess, I am obsessed, with the process, not the best, but as good as the rest and trying to break from the flesh, when you get rhyming surely you must be jest, like a bear guarding a nest, you are acting like a pest.
Like a bullet flying through your chest it will eviscerate, let me demonstrate the way that you should iterate, like an animal falling for bait.
Your innate to what you know and think your untouchable, But instead you're susceptible and my rhymes be making you a vegetable.
Your easily manageable and barely passable, although you put up a tough front, it's just a lyricist's hunt, I've got the gun and you're on the run.
With these flows that I spew, this shit is new and the worst part is it's all true, perhaps not to you.
It will be like the Holocaust and you're a Jew, or maybe a gypsy and can't do anything else but flee.
It's me.....

Quote from OGrilla

I'll give this a shot and put eight in your hot head,
Still spittin half-dead, dark face turnin red.
Bringin heat you say, put that sword away.
What, you see yourself still standin up today?
My taste is acquired: your lines are so tired.
Usin every reference you can yet still mired
In your old ways. Lookin to sink your hook in
A fat catch of laughs but my lines send you bookin
It. Cookin it away, all the children here to stay
And watch this tame man make you pray.
I see your demise deep within your own eyes,
The bottomless pits in which you stash your lies.
But when I kill you and grill you
In a spit with my sick shit twisted I'll still thrill you.
Can't escape from this vise, a grip I have devised
To shove my cold-hearted rhymes deep into your eyes.

This is a mortal kombat that'll leave you shaking like it's sub zero
Outside these lines get deep inside you until you feel it in your marrow
And break you down, that's right this is rhythmic leukemia
On your grave, it will read "he was killed by helium"
Because, from within me, these rhymes make me elevate
But if you try to take then in all they give you is headaches
This style is elite, you cannot compete
Leave you beat worse than Miniman's meat
On a Saturday night, the last thing you'll do is live, bro
Because my flow is a tommy gun and you're Santino
These lines are an olympic triathlon, changing up for miles
While your rhymes are of a lesser god, it's Marlie Matlin style
The children aren't here forever, I'll send them over to foster parents
Bastardized by my rhymes like my style of no inheritance
That's right, I referenced ODB in that last lyric
So I "rock a fella" on the mic with my flow so seismic

:Jutsu:
Flows?
Pshh
Ive seen piss in a toilet flow better,after reading that letter,
It feals like,godda step up to the mic,but you see,
my ryhmes are like nit's in a sweater,However,
You seem to have hope,lol that was a joke,
Holocaust,man my ryhmes rise frome the hypocaust,
The lava from the core,runs like a river,
Dont shiver,dont even Quake in fear,
lol I saw that tear,
Youv got the ryhming skills of a infant,
lol punn intendid,well your pretty consitant,nvm,
**** off,
you turn off,you couldnt even please a stick,
well that's about the size of your dick, about a half an inch,
dipstick,oops this is gettin a bit graphic,But hell I godda take Drastic,
Measures,
Now you see Ive seen you flee,pee runnin down yo knees,
Tears slidin down yo cheeks,with fear in your eyes,
Hopein that you dont die,man at least try,
wow your dissapointment,but I cant miss my appointment,
With destiny,you can take your time,
Comein up with a new ryhme,
With your wall of text thinkin,that your the best?
Lol
That was only a test,
This is only round one,

Quote from Moch12

:Jutsu:
Flows?
Pshh
Ive seen piss in a toilet flow better,after reading that letter,
It feals like,godda step up to the mic,but you see,
my ryhmes are like nit's in a sweater,However,
You seem to have hope,lol that was a joke,
Holocaust,man my ryhmes rise frome the hypocaust,
The lava from the core,runs like a river,
Dont shiver,dont even Quake in fear,
lol I saw that tear,
Youv got the ryhming skills of a infant,
lol punn intendid,well your pretty consitant,nvm,
**** off,
you turn off,you couldnt even please a stick,
well that's about the size of your dick, about a half an inch,
dipstick,oops this is gettin a bit graphic,But hell I godda take Drastic,
Measures,
Now you see Ive seen you flee,pee runnin down yo knees,
Tears slidin down yo cheeks,with fear in your eyes,
Hopein that you dont die,man at least try,
wow your dissapointment,but I cant miss my appointment,
With destiny,you can take your time,
Comein up with a new ryhme,
With your wall of text thinkin,that your the best?
Lol
That was only a test,
This is only round one,

It's the art of persuasion, it can lead a nation,
You can consider this an invasion, though it's not a desecration of the mind.
My words are baffling you'll find, and my tone will make you resign,
It's all part of a design, in my mind, makes me feel like I'm flying.
soaring in the sky and, most raps now these days are boring,
I'm not distorting, but imploring and deploring.
Shit even if you're ignoring me, you can't deny that your rhymes are a catastrophe, a calamity, tragically, making me spit lyrics dramatically,
All while you do so counterproductantly.
It's like watching a plane crash, accept you don't operate that fast.
It can't be described with any positive words, and I can't laugh afterwards.
Don't be absurd, you left the game before you even joined,
You're like kanye west,
****ing annoying
I can't even contemplate your rhymes, trying to read those lines,
It's like you're not even trying.
I'll sit and watch as you say the same insults fifty times;
and as a result you need to meet a therapist,
dumbass thinking you're hilarious.
I'll deploy, what I employ and destroy your joy, don't play koi.
you're like a little boy that just ruins all his toys,
just to get the same toys brand new.
It's true and I hope it's not to late, but soon;
To be what I want to be, steadily, bringing the melody;
While not being contradictory.

I'll slap you so hard that you wont have another cheek to turn,
oh I'm sorry do you need some ice for that burn?

Man I'll finish this verse, say it's your turn, once I'm done with you I'll have to call a nurse.

Quote from FoShizzle

When the judges say who wins :D
Too lazy to make something atm, will do later biatch

I shall judge who wins once the rap battle is over though.
Also, OGrilla and Gavel's rap battle is awesome far


By the way, I'm willing to rap battle with somebody, as this seems like lotsa fun. It'd be just for the fun only though

:Jutsu:
Whoa
what ever happend to this being for fun Eeeh? xD
But seriously
Now im im pissed,after being dissed,by who I thought was a friend,
Obviously pretend,you wernt my friend,you used me as a pawn,out smarting me, brain over brawn,i thought it was cool in the begginin,were we started out sittin,belevin.......but after a while I saw the truth,

your dad was a girl dressed,in a suit,
she planned out the day you and your mom met,that was also when her bed set got all wet,with tears (GODDUM),one of her greatest fears, A son,
It turned out your shemale dad busted a gut, she had to run, but couldnt,a few months later kicken and screamin came a son,cryin and bleedin,
What a mess that was your dad's good dress
:T

Now here we are 16 years later
Your mom's a whore and your dad got tazerd......
lol
That's enough on you lets talk about me,
im in the beta stages,rap battles are like mazes,of the mind,
I couldnt figure out why,
Just why certaint words wouldnt ryhme,but in time I discoverd
A solution,To stop the pollution,corrupting my mind,
Like miniature mines,waiting for some one to fail,
To trip over there tail,
My solution
In time youll figure out why I had to stop here....
but dont worry young Jutsu
As the plot thickens,and im stricken with luck,
Ill be there to help you clean the garbage up,

Quote from Moch12

:Jutsu:
Whoa
what ever happend to this being for fun Eeeh? xD
But seriously
Now im im pissed,after being dissed,by who I thought was a friend,
Obviously pretend,you wernt my friend,you used me as a pawn,out smarting me, brain over brawn,i thought it was cool in the begginin,were we started out sittin,belevin.......but after a while I saw the truth,

your dad was a girl dressed,in a suit,
she planned out the day you and your mom met,that was also when her bed set got all wet,with tears (GODDUM),one of her greatest fears, A son,
It turned out your shemale dad busted a gut, she had to run, but couldnt,a few months later kicken and screamin came a son,cryin and bleedin,
What a mess that was your dad's good dress
:T

Now here we are 16 years later
Your mom's a whore and your dad got tazerd......
lol
That's enough on you lets talk about me,
im in the beta stages,rap battles are like mazes,of the mind,
I couldnt figure out why,
Just why certaint words wouldnt ryhme,but in time I discoverd
A solution,To stop the pollution,corrupting my mind,
Like miniature mines,waiting for some one to fail,
To trip over there tail,
My solution
In time youll figure out why I had to stop here....
but dont worry young Jutsu
As the plot thickens,and im stricken with luck,
Ill be there to help you clean the garbage up,

In the end you don't know where it begins,
like highschool kids, caught in a trend.
It quickly becomes fluctuated and complicated,
beyond what anyone could have calculated.
But you can't pretend, that any help that they send,
Can make, that shit right again.
These are words to describe your verse and thoughts.
Tell me, is it easy to think when your mind rots?
Your flows are like a scatter plot,
they're hard to follow and they're not really hot.
Shit at least they're creative...not.
Whats the matter? Look like you need a shot.
A bit under the weather? I'm a lyrical bot.
Distraught, your ass looks caught, in a loop hole.
Shit bro you need to give it more soul.
You can call me the fag patrol, keeping homo's like you under control.
Move along folks theres nothing to see here.
Shit I though queers are supposed to be good at theatre.
"Could you atleast act alive?"
I'll beat you and leave you to die,
you're already deprived and suprise!
Everything you know is a lie,
from how to tie your shoes to the color of the sky.
Oh my.
Because you're in my world now, don't ask how, or why, just roll with it.
Like you roll with being ignorant and insignificant.
You'll never be important.
Just a peasant you can call me master,
You're unpleasant, your a little boy and I'm a pastor.
Your mind isn't present.
I'll win this battle I hope your ready,
The way I am keeping it steady.
I'll take your ass down anyday,
you'll never be smarter than a retard anyway.

Your turn bro.

:jutsu:
So the crack finnally caught up to you eeh?
My ryhmes dont flow,not of what normal beings know,
It's called style,
Something you lack,youll never get better with the way you rap,
All you do is pick and and tease,
all I see is dork who can beg and plead,
As you can see,
Where diffrent like night and day,Darkness and Light,Yin and Yang,
We never agree....But what you need,
Is a life.
all youve been doing is doggin on me,thinking that you can compete,
But here's another thing your lagging
Common sense,
Ive seen shred's of grass with that had better attempts,
At breaking me,
Is this your limit? is this your extent?....
theres a diffrence between me and you
Ive got a brain the size of a brick,
Filled with knowledge, and sense.
You have a brain,the size of your dick,
minniscule.
Now im serieus,which makes me delarius,
you can rhyme as good as my dime,
it's so shiny,but it's not tiny......
The earth moves in a natural direction kinda like my style.
I just let it happen,
Your turn

Quote from Moch12

:jutsu:
So the crack finnally caught up to you eeh?
My ryhmes dont flow,not of what normal beings know,
It's called style,
Something you lack,youll never get better with the way you rap,
All you do is pick and and tease,
all I see is dork who can beg and plead,
As you can see,
Where diffrent like night and day,Darkness and Light,Yin and Yang,
We never agree....But what you need,
Is a life.
all youve been doing is doggin on me,thinking that you can compete,
But here's another thing your lagging
Common sense,
Ive seen shred's of grass with that had better attempts,
At breaking me,
Is this your limit? is this your extent?....
theres a diffrence between me and you
Ive got a brain the size of a brick,
Filled with knowledge, and sense.
You have a brain,the size of your dick,
minniscule.
Now im serieus,which makes me delarius,
you can rhyme as good as my dime,
it's so shiny,but it's not tiny......
The earth moves in a natural direction kinda like my style.
I just let it happen,
Your turn

My names Jutsu believe it or not,
But you can call me rock because I'll be rocking your shit up and down the block.
It appears I have a knack, your just an opheliac.
Hey lets start a suicide pact,
you can go first,
the way you commit verbacide, I really hope you coincide.
With the last verse, making people disburse.
Causing a deleria, because I insight hysteria.
I can ruralize an area, causing me to do like;
what I think is right, my sight seeing nothing but horror and fright.
This isn't a fight, don't give me that trite,
Though I wish I was more polite,
Trying to be more like a knight.
It's called being chivelrous, less mysterious,
making people furious and curious.
My creativity never ends, Jutsu™
I can just rap, again and again.

whoa I feal it....
I sense it.....
The end is near,Gather all of your strength,
the darkness the night,all of your greatest fears,
I know you sleep with a night light,and teddys name is chakra,
But go now,fall asleep,dont wake up,try not to peak,
because Now it's fright night where all the gouls bring chills down the bravest of spines,
Your veins tie like vines,leaving you speachless,Shivering on the floor,
I know you can beat this,Jutsu but then agin,your hope's been used
Like a dirty rag,
scrubbing the backs of retired hag's,it's way past your bed time Jutsu....I can see those bags....dont stay up
Dont worry I wont bite.......(while your looking)
Your tierd in desperate need of a nap......*YAAAWN.....umm yea good night,
I cant survive
But now I shall dive into my bed,
Filled with spider webs,and Threads.....

WTF
YEa im tired this was really bad xD good night good game well finish this tomorrow xD

Actually we're done now, I will let them decide the victor.
Good rappage dude.