Freestyling [Dev]

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Devour
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Apr 19, 2008 11:00 PM #118555
I worked on this animation for about a day. I think it's my best yet.

http://www.swfcabin.com/open/1208640202
18 fps

http://www.swfcabin.com/open/1208640357
24 fps

C&C
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Apr 19, 2008 11:04 PM #118558
It would be very nice if it wouldn't be so wobbly.

You are definetly improving.
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Apr 19, 2008 11:33 PM #118576
Extremely wobbly, though it looks smooth.
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Apr 19, 2008 11:34 PM #118577
Okay. I'll work harder on redrawing, then. More C&C
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Apr 20, 2008 1:11 AM #118618
nice, but it r wobbly
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Apr 20, 2008 1:29 AM #118639
A bit of leg resizing, and the landing of the jumps don't look so impacted as he lands from a gymnast's moves. Would you bounce that little in reaction to those moves?

I think not. >:(

It's overall not bad. Keep free-style-ing your animations and you will get better as time slowly goes on.
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Apr 20, 2008 1:27 PM #119129
You probaly heard this...wobbly.

But I like your style, and it seemed very smooth to.
So, just fix the wobbly :D

Later.