Mikel wanted me to remix this and newgrounds isn't working right now for me, so I uploaded it on youtube.
here
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=iVeECcJHnkM

lol at the parental advisory

Too much panning, IMO, the song doesn't sound centered. And the rappers really need to get some better microphones, most of it is just distorted.

i think the distorted parts were supposed to be a recording effect emulating a megaphone, actually

IIRC he had this problem in one of his other tracks too, and even if that was the intended effect it still sounds bad.

With all the panning this doesn't have any power, because it's so torn apart. Also the rap parts are... mediocre at best.