Practice? practice!

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Apr 3, 2010 9:01 AM #563028
http://www.fileize.com/view/46a06316-9d3/
http://www.fileize.com/view/f2b98013-b6f/

I am practicing drawing.. I can see a big difference btwn the first and 2nd after one day of drawing = )
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Apr 3, 2010 11:26 AM #563043
That was very sexy, the movements and figures were great! I guess the next step is detailing?
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Apr 3, 2010 2:04 PM #563069
Pretty awesome, Michoolll. Although, when it's all sketchy like that you can't really tell what's going on until you watch it more than once.
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Apr 4, 2010 3:28 AM #563449
ya, I need to clean up too. I'm just practicing basic human anatomy first though. thanks :)
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Apr 9, 2010 12:55 PM #566189
Its good, but the lines need to be defined more. As the animation goes on you gradually drew the lines rougher and rougher.
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Apr 9, 2010 7:21 PM #566330
The swinging animation needed to settle. I really hate it when animations take an abrupt ending. The swing had a settling with easing and the step at the end, but the step ended without any slowing down or anything.

Also your lines are really scratchy. The smaller the brush and the fewer lines you have the more vivid the motion blah blah blah you know all this already why am I typing this nice work.