mmm

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=fPoWV6wOggE&feature=related ?

Nice job though.

mmm

Ugh, that whammy effect in the beginning is just annoying as hell

More complete panning, you really should stop doing that, it doesn't sound good

You're a good guitarist, though, some of the whammy stuff is a bit much but overall it's not bad

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=fP2RYxedkuY&feature=related

Yeah I guess he didn't use as much of a whammy effect there.
Oh well...:P
I think my solo is clearer than Dime's.

Thanks Exilement!