Be honest and tell me the problems of this animation

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Apr 15, 2010 3:40 PM #569920

I spent my time on this one and really want CC. Honest, true, CC. Don't say things like "your really good for a beginner" I want you to nit-pick every flaw in the animation to the max level, I want you to say what you think even if you think it will hurt my feelings I can take it. Imagine your CC'ing poppet or jutsu, that's the level I want.

EDIT: I'll put the piv. in so you can look at the frames.
http://pivotup.com/files/6u84bgxt.piv
(uuum... ignore the title of the animation, I don't know what possesed me to call it that)

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Apr 15, 2010 5:08 PM #569948

Damnit.

I've spent the last ten minutes watching this over and over.

Not one flaw.

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Apr 15, 2010 5:19 PM #569950

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Damnit.

I've spent the last ten minutes watching this over and over.

Not one flaw.

Wow, no-ones ever said that before :) Thank you.

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Apr 15, 2010 6:27 PM #569959

I dont see a flaw eighter , but I only see on one frame that the feet got under the horizon.
But why should i look at that , thats one of those minor bs C&C crap that you must ignore.

I love it.

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Apr 15, 2010 7:08 PM #569971

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I dont see a flaw eighter , but I only see on one frame that the feet got under the horizon.
But why should i look at that , thats one of those minor bs C&C crap that you must ignore.

I love it.

Why thank you :3
And to think, the first time we ever met eachother it ended up in a fight. If I remember correctly it was in the beginners thread, haaaaah sweet nostalgia. And just to show how far I've come since then I'd like to make a contrast..

*Sniff* sniff* I LOVE YOU GUYS!!!!

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Apr 15, 2010 7:09 PM #569973

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I dont see a flaw eighter , but I only see on one frame that the feet got under the horizon.
But why should i look at that , thats one of those minor bs C&C crap that you must ignore.

I love it.

Agreed, but I do notice a tiny nearly negligible bit of shakyness between the first and second steps. at least it looks that way, but it might be the other foot overlapping it.

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Apr 15, 2010 7:10 PM #569974

While there is no flaw the arms are incredibly stiff and the motion is actually quite off. I don't know if that's the style you intended on - the cartoony style. If so, that's fine.

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Apr 15, 2010 7:33 PM #569992

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I spent my time on this one and really want CC. Honest, true, CC. Don't say things like "your really good for a beginner" I want you to nit-pick every flaw in the animation to the max level, I want you to say what you think even if you think it will hurt my feelings I can take it. Imagine your CC'ing poppet or jutsu, that's the level I want.

EDIT: I'll put the piv. in so you can look at the frames.
http://pivotup.com/files/6u84bgxt.piv
(uuum... ignore the title of the animation, I don't know what possesed me to call it that)

tis goooooooooooooooood!!!

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Apr 15, 2010 7:39 PM #569997

Change your in step easing (taking a step, bringing back from a step), the arms look very odd, and the upper body leans forward why? A walk is supposed to have high's and lows.

Imagine this. Draw a circle, and put a horizontal line on the top of the head. Don't move the line. When you start your step, your head goes over the line, when you are about to place your lifted foot on the ground (taking a step), the head goes under the line. Your animation consists of the head going straight down until the stick figure stands straight again.

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Apr 15, 2010 7:50 PM #570002

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Change your in step easing (taking a step, bringing back from a step), the arms look very odd, and the upper body leans forward why? A walk is supposed to have high's and lows.

Imagine this. Draw a circle, and put a horizontal line on the top of the head. Don't move the line. When you start your step, your head goes over the line, when you are about to place your lifted foot on the ground (taking a step), the head goes under the line. Your animation consists of the head going straight down until the stick figure stands straight again.

Yes I see what you mean, thank you.
EDIT: Oh and oblivion EX, yes I know what your talking about don't worry it's just the feet overlapping.
Zawmbee: yes that's the kind of style I was looking for.
binky: :3

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Apr 15, 2010 7:53 PM #570004

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Why thank you :3
And to think, the first time we ever met eachother it ended up in a fight. If I remember correctly it was in the beginners thread,

Can't remember. >.>

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Apr 15, 2010 7:56 PM #570005

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Can't remember. >.>

I triple posted and you said something along the lines of "shut up noob or feel my wraith" and I said "your threatening me over the internet? weak." Or so I think.

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Apr 15, 2010 8:04 PM #570009

Shut up noob or feel my wrath!

Nice animation though :P Although the transition from walking to stopping was fairly weird IMO.

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Apr 15, 2010 8:05 PM #570010

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Shut up noob or feel my wrath!

Nice animation though :P Although the transition from walking to stopping was fairly weird IMO.

What do you mean by wierd? I need an explanation!

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Apr 15, 2010 8:19 PM #570018

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Wasn't the one on the top right like 3 days ago?

And I'm very, very impressed. I see no flaws.