Your leg movements are all bad. You're picking up the dd accent and it is really not helping. You need to keep the knee bent longer when you're moving the leg forwards and then only extend when you're ready to come back again. Don't scuff your feet.
On the uppercut when the black guy flies into the air the physics are off. Even though you've had the slow motion, he still has that forwards momentum. The punch was straight up which should have meant that he went up and kept moving right at the same time.
There's a bit that it's hard to describe. It's like, when the black guy goes behind the red guy for the first time. He rocks back on his legs before going forwards again. Except he doesn't. His legs stay stiff and all the momentum is being absorbed by the camera movement. He needs to bend his legs and take that momentum like a man.
Stick the black guy's non-punching arm out further before that first miss. It doesn't pull back enough.
The red guy's twist is nice but his right-most arm is shaky on the exit. It either needs followthrough or to just be cut and let the other guy's punch make the movement unnecessary.
At the end there's some random movement which I think might be an attempt at a kick from the black guy. If it is, it needs more frames. It's very unclear.
And like everyone's said - don't teleport.
Don't use those lines for trails/particles on the punches. They look bad and a little bit lazy.
If I didn't mention it assume it's good (well, assume that I think it's good. ArchAngel would have more to say, I'm sure). It's not a bad animation really. It's just not the quality you're looking for.
[Moch12] High Intermediate shat
Started by: Mark | Replies: 33 | Views: 2,352
Apr 18, 2010 12:23 PM #571501
Apr 18, 2010 12:59 PM #571528
Quote from Arch-AngelOr just completely implement special abilities. You don't have to have a source.
Also, I was in the DDC6 when I was low intermediate. I'm theblindsamurai_135
http://www.ddcollab.com/ddc6.html
Wow man , there where almost no movements in there and they say your low intern?
Apr 18, 2010 1:03 PM #571532
Quote from poppetje3DWow man , there where almost no movements in there and they say your low intern?
True that. Now days if you posted that your poll would look something like this:
Lower - 40%
High beg - 69%
Borderline - 1%
Low Inters -
Higher -
It's just the retarted way DD works.
Apr 18, 2010 1:09 PM #571537
Quote from poppetje3DWow man , there where almost no movements in there and they say your low intern?
Actually, the movements that were in it, easing, physics, etc, plus scenery and environment interaction is what makes it low intermediate.
The standards have probably changed (Personally I wouldn't consider it intermediate, but oh well. It was in the DDC6 which is intermediate+ and it was the last one on one of the skill sections. My High Inter anims looked waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaay better).
I'm sorry, but cronos. Go away. You have yet to contribute to the actual purpose of the thread. And you know nothing about what you're talking about.
Apr 18, 2010 1:15 PM #571541
I'm serious. The people in DD can't seem to see the difference between borderline and low beginner. If you posted that animation now, the votes would be all over the place.
Apr 18, 2010 1:18 PM #571542
Watch it, you two. If something develops you're both going to be banned, whoever started it.
Apr 18, 2010 1:21 PM #571544
I'm sure that the person that started it was already reported, thus further confrontation should be prevented.
Apr 18, 2010 1:38 PM #571549
By that post, I wanted you to show me your high intermediate animations. I don't see how thats reportable.
Apr 18, 2010 1:43 PM #571553
Quote from CronosBy that post, I wanted you to show me your high intermediate animations. I don't see how thats reportable.
True dat.
Cronos:I'm dfr179 why did u send me a friend request...CLEAR YOUR DAMN INBOX!!!
Moch:Once again you have surprised me,but being a measly low-beginner I cant really tell your rank.
Apr 18, 2010 2:00 PM #571562
Because I want sex. Why else.
Apr 18, 2010 3:07 PM #571586
Meh.
Good enough for me.
Good enough for me.
Apr 18, 2010 3:30 PM #571595
You don't need good movements to be Intermediate :v
Apr 18, 2010 6:32 PM #571683
Decent movements, easing, and effects can get you inter lol. It isn't hard.
Apr 18, 2010 6:33 PM #571686
Quote from Arch-AngelDecent movements, easing, and effects can get you inter lol. It isn't hard.
Except you're Buzz, in that case it gets you Veteran, hahaha.
Apr 19, 2010 11:04 PM #572177
man I miss the begginers section already o.o
I wanted to post it there.....>
Well this thread got spammed to the highest potential

I flashed this animation and it was still slow.
I rushed the ending because I have to go
(YAY FOR RHYMES!!!!)
I wanted to make some simple moves...run,elbow,reaction,fade
I wanted to post it there.....>
Well this thread got spammed to the highest potential

I flashed this animation and it was still slow.
I rushed the ending because I have to go
(YAY FOR RHYMES!!!!)
I wanted to make some simple moves...run,elbow,reaction,fade