I finally finished it. Took quite a bit of effort to finally finish it up. I know there are some flaws with transitions and such, but I really wanted to finish it. Next time I'll try to make a picture perfect animation, but this I will say was a good learning experience!

http://www.newgrounds.com/portal/view/534039

Please enjoy, but more importantly VOTE 5 >: O

Ahahaha! Freakin hilerious! Oh my god seriously get in touch with dave (that's actually a TV channel.....i'm not ****ing kidding either) and ask them to air it, they do shit like that.
EDIT: I just realized that the animation on this is better than most actuall animated tv shows....with lots of hired animators..dude you got a real talent there.

Its so cute! X3 And knowing i should be your #1 fan I couldn't resist but to vote 5.

Awwwwwwh, adorable.

Loved the walking scene, haha. Fav'd and 5'd

Pretty damn awesome, but Id like to point out a few things if you dont mind, first of all the "-"s

- dimensions are way too small, even if I have 22 lcd its like a little square that I cant really see anything on (I know why you used that small dimensions)
- the eye close up scene, seems quite rushed to me, its because of the lines that make the eye..
- the bird, when hes going down and up to get the corn or whatever, there shoudl be more inbetweens
- the first sneak cycle, his but is way too behind the legs, he would fall over, try to walk like this with your legs coming that far forward, try to walk normally and then shift your butt back and you will stop.
- shakyness, in some scenes it was really obvious
- the yellow text in the credits, shoudl be pink, purple or gray

and now the "+"s

+ the intro is cool
+ music
+ the color balance, I love how you used the colors
+ the background
+ the smoothness and fluidness of the characters movements
+ the way the bird jumps and turns, thats something incredibly cute :D
+ when the pink guy covers behind the tree, epic anticipation and great flow
+ the idea with 3 sneak cycles
+ great anticipation and everything about the birds take off
+ awesome physics when he the character jumps into the water
+ I cant really say how much I adore that water effect, it was INSANE !
+ credits were cute, I like how you kept it in the same style all the way through, everything was smooth and clear, good job.

8.5/10 because of the dimensions and some parts seemed rushed to me, great job, you indeed are one of the most skilled people around here.

ng error:

Type id is AD_ERROR_TYPE Can't show anything?

I'm getting the same message. But from what you have showed me so far, that shits dope bro.

yeah newground's ****ed up
check dA or FluidAnims or something

EDIT: Here's the dA link.
http://miccool.deviantart.com/art/Birrus-161684561

There's just so much to love here. There are a few knicks but I'll only say them if you want to hear them, because chances are you know what they are.

The water particles are just fantastic.
The motions were fluent. I'm almost really disappointed that you can't compete against me in the stickpage competition.
It was adorable.
There was a very nice and finished feel to it, mostly thanks to the excellent use of an overlay

Well done!

Awethome. Definitely awethome.

@tawnik: I agree with the dimension thing, but the major reason I did it was for slower, less compatible computers (mine for example) that can't handle it even on low quality. If you want to watch a bigger screen, the NG viewer thing has an option for larger dimensions on the top right. =). I agree with everything else you said too, most errors, I'd say is due to rushing and laziness. Shakiness, however has been a big reoccuring problem I've had so I need some more practice on clean up. I'd say my biggest problem is transitions and direction though.

Also thanks for all the +'s ^_^


@Kitsune: thanks a lot man. You have a good eye for that overlay thing. Most people can't tell.

@N T, zawmbee, sonoya, bubbles, dark: Thanks a lot. I'll be making more, so keep watching =]

Well at first I didn't see it, but I had to look back and see what made that neat texture through it. Good luck on your next project!

That was Awesome. Epic man. Well, I rated 9/10 because it's just short(I'm very sorry by saying that but i just wanna say.)

Quote from Coldzero

because it's just short

You need to learn how to rate. :/

Yes. Yes i do. You got a link?