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Apr 28, 2010 5:47 PM #577304
Older one since 2010 animating:
http://i44.tinypic.com/14c8sue.gif

Newest one:
Image

CC please. The leg doesn't quite seem to work, I need help with that.
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Apr 28, 2010 5:54 PM #577310
The landing was incredibly bad, there was no real sense of force implicated to the kick. Plus there was no reaction in the whole thing.
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Apr 28, 2010 5:56 PM #577313
Ok.. getting somewhere...

Now someone who also can tell me HOW to make that look different?
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Apr 28, 2010 5:57 PM #577314
Well, start of by adding a bounce to the blue guy as he falls down. Add some easing and relatively more movements to the black guy as he just dropped on a guys back, he must need to bend or crouch forward or something. It all looked a little dry.
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Apr 28, 2010 5:58 PM #577315
Thanks :)
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Apr 28, 2010 11:55 PM #577404
Your back. It seemed like his legs did a weird jolt at the end. The arms on the landing were a bit overeased. I am sure you will get over your rust in no time.
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Apr 29, 2010 5:09 AM #577494
I sure hope so. Thanks for the CC.
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Apr 29, 2010 1:26 PM #577650
Well, there isn't much movements except the text and the kick-land part but I'll C&C on those. The landing was a little off. The stick was stiff and the reactions lacked some, you know, Reactions. Overall it was nice.
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Apr 29, 2010 4:19 PM #577705
Nah, overall it sucked, but thanks for the CC :)
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Apr 30, 2010 9:22 PM #578439
New one. CC.