Total War

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Feb 6, 2012 3:35 PM #588776
If it's possible, and I don't wanna be arrogant or something, I would like to add my character

DiPi: He is more specialized in hand-to-hand and knife combat and mostly uses the weapons of his enemy, being a little good with firearms and other weapons. He is an expert of stealth, being not quite muscolar, and always tries to not kill his opponents, except when necessary. He likes to joke even in dangerous situations and to get drunk.

If you think that I should remove or change something, or that it isn't what you were hoping for, feel free to answer me.

P.S. I can change something, yes, but I will not make him homosexual :3

P.P.S I'm serious
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Feb 7, 2012 11:04 AM #589298
Kai. If you read the front, it's not arrogant, I'm kind of asking for people to join.
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Feb 7, 2012 11:56 AM #589328
Thanks, then. By the way, do I have to change something?
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Feb 7, 2012 7:27 PM #589544
Change something? If you mean in the details, no. As long as there's enough info, I won't change anything. And yes, there is enough info.
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Feb 7, 2012 7:35 PM #589545
wow man your description of the character makes it ten times more awesome
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Feb 8, 2012 7:46 PM #590127
New Feature: Zeppo117 has drawn pictures of the characters! Zeppo and Cel complete, working on DiPi.
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Feb 8, 2012 7:54 PM #590129
wow man you surely wanna make this a must-see!
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Feb 8, 2012 7:55 PM #590133
Just to make it clear, the pictures are zeppo's, not mine. I think some people might get confused since it's in my post. (i added the text and cropped the size, etc.)
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Feb 8, 2012 7:57 PM #590135
Hey Excellion you seem really dedicated to this story and length-wise it's looking really good. Just wanted to let you know I'm not passing this up as a read. I'm just waiting for when I get the time on my hands to read and contemplate the stuff you've written. Once I read this up I'll most likely consider tossing in a character of mine. In the mean time keep up your effort.
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Feb 8, 2012 7:58 PM #590136
Thanks Sacred! I actually neglected it for a while before the merge, so I'm making up for the lost time.
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Feb 8, 2012 7:59 PM #590137
Glad to hear it.
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Feb 8, 2012 9:30 PM #590230
ugh long story i feel like im dying lol
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Feb 8, 2012 10:13 PM #590266
:mad: Just because it's long doesn't mean that it's bad. If I get some more characters, this'll be a couple times longer than it currently is.
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Feb 8, 2012 10:34 PM #590283
Quote from greatmuqeet
ugh long story i feel like im dying lol


You're here in the literature thread to either submit your own original writings or to read other's. If you have a problem with a long read then don't even come to this section.
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Feb 8, 2012 10:43 PM #590291
Picture of DiPi is up! Again, credit to Zeppo117. I hope you like it, DiPi!
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