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Feb 4, 2012 7:17 AM #587787
Finish it?

http://www.truploader.com/view/103725

I was thinking of naming it 'Stylez' because i switch from the brush to the line tool, and i was thinking about keeping the motion for the rest of the anim. Should I keep at it, or?
Note that this is my fourth proper animation using Flash. I have had about 7 years experience with pivot however.
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Feb 4, 2012 7:28 AM #587796
this is nice: i like the movements and the style you use for different sticks. maybe a bit too fast for my liking but that isn't anything a lower framerate can't fix. the only glaring flaw i see is that the sticks look smaller in the end than they did in the beginning of the animation, not sure if intentional though.

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Feb 4, 2012 7:47 AM #587803
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this is nice: i like the movements and the style you use for different sticks. maybe a bit too fast for my liking but that isn't anything a lower framerate can't fix. the only glaring flaw i see is that the sticks look smaller in the end than they did in the beginning of the animation, not sure if intentional though.

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Thanks man, and yeah, I'm still trying to get a hang on keeping them the same size, even when I use the side rulers.
I really need to invest in a tablet soon too.
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Feb 5, 2012 8:43 AM #588307
First one reminded me about Rezter. Keep it.
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Feb 5, 2012 11:16 PM #588540
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First one reminded me about Rezter. Keep it.


will do. I've been working on a new style anyway, I'll put it in there.
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Feb 5, 2012 11:44 PM #588546
Put more flow into, the stick move in a stop & go manner. if you can do that i suggest you finish, random violence is nice.
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Feb 6, 2012 2:46 AM #588594
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Put more flow into, the stick move in a stop & go manner. if you can do that i suggest you finish, random violence is nice.


Yeah, I'm still trying to get the hang of it, but I'll practice more. thanks for the CC.
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Feb 6, 2012 3:36 AM #588610
Don't add the numerous step noises. It bothers the viewer from paying attention visually when the audio is overpowering.
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Feb 6, 2012 11:25 AM #588719
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Don't add the numerous step noises. It bothers the viewer from paying attention visually when the audio is overpowering.


ok, I'll take em' out in the final version.
cheers.
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