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Some old stuff that could use some criticism

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Feb 5, 2012 1:12 PM #588360
Well now that we have so many active members that actually animate, I thought I would post up a couple animations from awhile back that never really got any criticism.

http://www.truploader.com/view/348725

http://www.cronosxiii.deviantart.com/#/d4akb8c
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Feb 5, 2012 1:58 PM #588380
Learn to animate fag. :|

No but on a serious note, that was great! I don't see much to criticize on. And you have style too. All that bothered me was on the second one, the particles on the floor were distracting. Maybe lower how many particles by a bit. But that's just my opinion. The particles made it great too. Nice animation overall. 10/10 for short animation. :)
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Feb 5, 2012 2:06 PM #588382
Thanks man. Yeah with the second one I really wanted to emphasize particles for some reason lol.
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Feb 5, 2012 2:10 PM #588385
damn, nice work !
can't wait to see more
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Feb 5, 2012 2:22 PM #588388
Wow, i really like your style!
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Feb 6, 2012 4:45 PM #588824
oh wow, your particles and effects are really well animated,great use of sound effects.
The movements are great and eased, but sometimes
its a bit too fast for me to see the hits. But maybe that is the point on the first animation. I've liked more the second animation, its more "readable" I can see a sense of direction, hits and force.
Anyways, you are an extremely good animator, I would love to see a long project from you, in the future! :D
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Feb 6, 2012 5:03 PM #588838
Ah thanks man that means a lot. Yeah the merge has definitely inspired me, and I will most likely be getting back into it soon.
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