This combo was made today, in like a few minutes I think.

- 15 fps ( http://antiup.net/view.php?id=8714746149Combo%20Short%201.swf )

- 18 fps ( http://antiup.net/view.php?id=89110055178Combo%20Short%201.swf )


here a thing, I did a couple of hours ova O_O Dont know lool. its short.

(bg mesmay, thx ^^, he kinda edited it)

- 24 fps? ( http://antiup.net/view.php?id=10410065741Background1%20Fight%20.swf )


Comment plz =]

the way you animate your arms on the second one makes me feel as if the arms have no movement. they need to sway with the body and everything.

First one looked good. The 2nd one, the fight was kinda slow. Also, some hits lacked force.

I don't like how the stick's arms are always tucked in to their body. It's unrealistic to have them tucked in like that at all times.

Not much action...well not "actiony" enough

Your sticks are very stiff, and the movements seem kinda unrealistic because of it. try making your stick movements a lot more "loose" or like T man said, your arms need to sway more...well actually everything needs to sway more

COntinue

The third link had really bad sounds, there's nothing when he jumps on the rocks.

STIFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFF

That's your main problem. Like T man said, every movement should cause every other part of the body to move as well. When you punch, there is follow-though. Your arm doesn't just stick out by itself.

Practice. A lot.

itleast u can save as diffrent fps's. whenever i try it doesnt work

ok thx guys. Yeah it seems it is T_T how do I fix it? People say move every limb and stuff every frame. BUT I DO THAT! So I Don't get it. Ill try and gonna be more smoother, and I know about the sounds =p I was trying to find the right ones.

Thx for the comments ^__^ Arms stuck to there body? Leta me check what you mean. Since arms are mostly stuck to a body.

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ok thx guys. Yeah it seems it is T_T how do I fix it? People say move every limb and stuff every frame. BUT I DO THAT! So I Don't get it. Ill try and gonna be more smoother, and I know about the sounds =p I was trying to find the right ones.

Thx for the comments ^__^ Arms stuck to there body? Leta me check what you mean. Since arms are mostly stuck to a body.

I said tucked, not stuck.

Your sticks are always like this:

Yes, even when they're jumping and running and attacking, their arms are always like that.

Let it loose a bit, add some motion to it.