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There's a few things wrong with this, but since I just made it my brain refuses to cooperate and discover the errors.

Feel free to leave comments/feedback/critiques/<3.

Looking good so far. Maybe more single framed 24 fps frames would make the motion clearer. If you're already doing that then nvm. It's pretty clear what's going on. Liking the effects. I'd tone down the saturation on the smoke but thats just me

yeah the pink smoke shouldn't be so saturated but is it just me or were the guide lines for the size of the sticks still there? looks pretty good though. continue it.

actually looking really nice there mango. I would have much preferred that they started brawling directly after the pink one burst through the wall, rather than adding that lame text. still, nice start.

Thanks for the feedback, guys!

I've got some work to do :>

Lol "Lame text" ^^^ but dude that smoke was awesome, might you be able to teach me how to add the shadow to the smoke effectively?

that...smoke...was..sexy...lol

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Lol "Lame text" ^^^ but dude that smoke was awesome, might you be able to teach me how to add the shadow to the smoke effectively?

make a layer ontop of the smoke animation.
turn the alpha down in the color picker. the option to lower the alpha/make the color transparent is next to the color wheel in the color menu when you're selecting your colors
draw the shadowed area with a brush. if you did the alpha part right it should just be a darker shade of the smoke layer

It would have been nice if you could have made the smoke fade out but it's fine either way.
It was good over all but the roll looked a bit weird when i did a frame by frame look at it. Although the camera was moving back, it looked like he was just sliding back for no apparent reason. This is probably cuz you didn't make the v-cam move that much as he was anticipating the roll. So when the fast part came in, it looked like the roll also did not have much movement in the camera.
Other than that it is really good. the blur effect was a nice touch too.