Suggestions please:

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the way you did this was pretty cool! i think your over all animation needs to be improved! some parts werent as fluid as i like and the characters were drawn a little sloppy at some points!
besides that i loved the backrounds and how everything was set up! the intro, music choice, etc. were very cool!

^dabigE13 took the words out of my mouth. Also, the overhead scene, his hat seems to be made in a diffrent perspective, unless he was bending forward in that scene. Overall, nice job! :D

D; thanks guys! and yeah, I noticed and fixed that, I'm hoping when I finish Crazy Jay will put it on the portal