my rhg

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Apr 12, 2012 6:54 PM #633599
Name: fire o
Powers: fire manipulation .He can manipulate different fires like:
-black fires : living fire
-violet fire: sticky fire
-yellow fire: electric fire can electrocute enemies
-green fire: if stick on him he will became more stronger also damages enemies
-blue fire: cold fire
-orange fire: friendly fire burns enemies only
-brown fire: can slow enemies
-booster sword: releases fires that boost him up (only use as a backup)
Weakness: water but his other fires cannot be killed by water so find another way to defeat him

About: since he was a child he has powers. He took five years to learn other fires

Demo: none yet
Battles: no battles yet
Score:0/1
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Apr 12, 2012 6:55 PM #633601
you need both a pic and a demo dude.
honestly, you shouldnt have made a thread without them.
also, the last part of that weakness is pretty unspecific.
you have to give a definite way to defeat your character.
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Apr 12, 2012 6:56 PM #633602
I'm not gonna say anything other than "check the rules again".
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Jan 5, 2013 11:27 AM #842823
LOLWUT
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Jan 5, 2013 11:52 AM #842828
The concept is good actually, its just that you didn't really take your time to make the RHG's picture and demo. Reported.
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Jan 5, 2013 12:14 PM #842838
Fix it
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Jan 5, 2013 12:36 PM #842845
That RHG can be interesting ^^ But you need more work and show us your demo :)
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Jan 6, 2013 6:40 AM #843808
Fire Addicted Lol btw fix this:why he have a 1 lose,Add a Pic and demo like they said,Improve your story, btw nice idea :D
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Jan 6, 2013 7:48 AM #843849
Someone needs to lock this thread for it has no demo and picture... Make a demo first before you make an RHG, dumbnuts. And be creative at the story -_-

Fix it or someone will lock this shit
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Jan 6, 2013 8:43 AM #843877
Dude fix your thread and your RHG's weakness you should add more weakness about the other fires.
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Jan 6, 2013 12:00 PM #843941
Quote from subzero1112
The concept is good actually, its just that you didn't really take your time to make the RHG's picture and demo. Reported.

go easy on him abit, Fileize is down and most Rhgs atm look in-complete, without a demo or picture, I get that he failed his rhg in different ways, no need to be so harsh.


You're gonna need to add the things everybody has mentioned

Just create a quick demo, make a picture in flash (shouldn't take too long), and you will need to fix your weakness, to add a sure-way to defeat your RHG, you should probably also change your score to 0/0 since you havent had any battles, as of yet.
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Jan 7, 2013 2:53 AM #844468
Quote from husy
go easy on him abit, Fileize is down and most Rhgs atm look in-complete, without a demo or picture, I get that he failed his rhg in different ways, no need to be so harsh.


You're gonna need to add the things everybody has mentioned

Just create a quick demo, make a picture in flash (shouldn't take too long), and you will need to fix your weakness, to add a sure-way to defeat your RHG, you should probably also change your score to 0/0 since you havent had any battles, as of yet.


Quote from husy
go easy on him abit, Fileize is down


Quote from husy
Fileize is down


If Fileize is down, there are still many websites that he can upload the demo and the picture like imageshack.us, deviantart's stash and many more. Subzero ain't going harsh because a demonstration AND a picture is required. He can made a lazily-made demo but understandable and a rushed picture, that's fine. And the picture is uploaded at imageshack and the demo in deviantart. Common sense, man...
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Jan 7, 2013 9:22 AM #844662
Quote from Omnitr0N
If Fileize is down, there are still many websites that he can upload the demo and the picture like imageshack.us, deviantart's stash and many more. Subzero ain't going harsh because a demonstration AND a picture is required. He can made a lazily-made demo but understandable and a rushed picture, that's fine. And the picture is uploaded at imageshack and the demo in deviantart. Common sense, man...


read the whole sentence.. not the first bit.... i was just saying most rhg's atm look like they dont have a demo or pic, and to go easy on him... Common sense to read a full sentence before thinking something about it..... man....