Zaix's Art shop! (OPEN) Making art for SP!

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balistiik
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Jul 20, 2012 4:03 PM #701390
yes you improved glad you did
though like drone said, your anatomy is off and your character's need depth

somethings I noticed is you still need to work on effects and poses, as well as adding detail (even the smallest of detail is important)
I like your third pic (again) though Ima have to say no :P
*insert retry screen here*
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Jul 20, 2012 4:15 PM #701395
IDK wut you guys mean by depth and anatomy BTW I'll still do another tryout later and I'll start putting alot of particles and shiz for effects in my next tryout.
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Jul 20, 2012 4:33 PM #701398
Quote from A13x@nd3r
IDK wut you guys mean by depth and anatomy BTW I'll still do another tryout later and I'll start putting alot of particles and shiz for effects in my next tryout.


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Jul 20, 2012 4:42 PM #701400
[edit] I'm done with that
balistiik
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Jul 20, 2012 8:36 PM #701524
https://join.me/742-148-442
doin art stuffs

EDIT: finished :P (don't go clicking the link)
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Jul 20, 2012 11:10 PM #701576
Cool streams guys. Guess what is even cooler?

This channel. #Artistry Cooler than Xero's channel.
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Jul 21, 2012 12:10 AM #701598
fuck you perspective <3
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Jul 21, 2012 1:10 AM #701626
Quote from Tenma Shinobi Leo
Cool streams guys. Guess what is even cooler?

This channel. #Artistry Cooler than Xero's channel.


I'm inclined to agree actually.
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nice mek.
Was watching gurren laggan for like, the 5th time....its not enough...I MUST WATCH IT FOR ETERNITY!
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Jul 21, 2012 2:03 AM #701651
Bitch please an eternity isn't enough
You need to watch it 100 life cycles >:0 (both seasons)

And thanks :3
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Jul 21, 2012 6:53 AM #701715
Noooiiice, Balis! I always admired your artistic style.
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Jul 21, 2012 6:56 AM #701716
Quote from GroundXero

Was watching gurren laggan for like, the 5th time....its not enough...I MUST WATCH IT FOR ETERNITY!


He he he... Perfect...

But just so that this post doesn't become irrelevant spam, I'll inquire about how my order is going. So how is it going?
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Jul 21, 2012 9:21 AM #701754
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.______. wooooooooow...... those angles look amazing but...is that her hair that has the mouth?
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Jul 21, 2012 9:35 AM #701764
Her eyes are really offset.
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Jul 21, 2012 2:12 PM #701849
@xiao lol yes
@kizu yeh I didn't really notice that (thanks)
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Jul 21, 2012 4:42 PM #701916
Man, the perspective on that is awesome! Like Kizu said, I would work on getting the eyes a bit more set, and maybe try to make your lineart a bit cleaner.