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May 28, 2012 12:23 AM #664891
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Detonating clay, sounds like there's alittle Deidara in there.


great minds think alike
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May 28, 2012 1:10 AM #664927
Hey.
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May 28, 2012 3:49 AM #665007
Not deidara inspired, just plain copied (since there's no difference between powers)
Personally, Id like to see more originality than this, I'm sure you can conjour up better ideas.
GL
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May 28, 2012 4:21 AM #665015
well.. i dont have mouthes on my hands....
should i remove the detonating clay?
because if so i have another idea that will take its place ^^
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May 28, 2012 4:31 AM #665022
It doesn't really matter, the over-all concept of the power is the exact same
"Clay animals that explode when near an enemy"

(skip to 3:14 to see my point)
like I said, I personally would like to see something more original, but it's your RHG and it depends on what everyone else thinks about it to be looked down upon generally.
So I'll just end my rant here, again GL
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May 28, 2012 5:09 AM #665043
a smexy rhg we got here brotha :>
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May 28, 2012 4:28 PM #665585
UPDATE*

-took away exploding clay
-added scarf ability
-added rage forms
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May 28, 2012 5:45 PM #665643
Looks like you've improved from your last demo. Keep at it! Btw Isn't "Sharpshooter mode" neon-drane's ability?

Oh and the sword can't be classified as a katana since the blade isn't curved. I guess you could call it a ninja-to without a tsuba though.
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May 29, 2012 12:02 PM #666129
neon drane has a sharpshooter mode?? O.O sorry should i change the name?

and the swords blade is slightly curved ( and it may be upgraded later >:) )


EDIT* added likes and dislikes
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May 29, 2012 12:11 PM #666132
Lol, if you look back far enough, neon also had a scarf that changes into these wing type things.
You sure you aren't taking his ideas...? -_O
Lol jk
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May 30, 2012 12:51 PM #666909
O.O ?? neon... umm.. no.. iv never seen his "wings" before?


UPDATE* added new special form

UPDATE* added new demo :)

UPDATE* Added story pt. 3
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May 30, 2012 1:00 PM #666917
But the story didn't say WHY she joined The EVIL Brotherhood?
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May 30, 2012 3:51 PM #666991
O.O ill edit that now (when i think of a reason :))

there its done :D

(is it just me or did a couple of posts get deleted of this page:confused:)



UPDATE* changed High-flyer Mode to Free-Flyer Mode
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Jun 3, 2012 5:44 PM #669580
I'll challenge you, when I'll make my RHG .
Yours is very interesting =D..
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Jun 9, 2012 6:48 PM #673439
UPDATE* changing sword design