My SAI arts

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FrozenIce

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May 14, 2012 7:25 PM #656539
http://www.fileize.com/view/d864e67c-786/ - My very first drawing in sai
http://www.fileize.com/view/ddb9a287-594/ - second drawing in sai
http://www.fileize.com/view/f607a9ab-679/ - third drawing in sai,which is actually my best :)
i'm working on a fourth one,which is actually a boy.
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May 14, 2012 7:27 PM #656543
they're pretty good, the problem I see there is the faces.
the second one was too small, and the last one's facial was a bit off.
I see improvement though, keep it up :)
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May 14, 2012 8:06 PM #656556
i like the last one in manny ways lol
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May 14, 2012 9:28 PM #656606
work on your faces. theyre a bit off.
you could also make up some more creative and less stiff looking poses
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May 14, 2012 10:21 PM #656630
Your first drawing in SAI is good.Not bad but you should improve on many things.Her hair is messy,You can improve on her face but it's not bad,Improve on your arms a bit,And her clothes doesn't really much look real.
Your second drawing needs improvement on the face,Mostly your eyes,Her hair on the top is too round, and your nose is too pointy.
Your third drawing is good.You can improve her arms a bit and also her feet,her face is okay but still need's improvement,and her cleavage at the right side breast isn't drawn at the right way.Try to make it mach with the end of her clothing.
Your drawings are really good.I can see potential in your art,practice always and you'll eventually become the best.You should also watch anime so that you can get ideas on the proper way of drawing.
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May 16, 2012 4:14 PM #657718
Your first drawing in SAI is good.Not bad but you should improve on many things.Her hair is messy,You can improve on her face but it's not bad,Improve on your arms a bit,And her clothes doesn't really much look real.
Your second drawing needs improvement on the face,Mostly your eyes,Her hair on the top is too round, and your nose is too pointy.
Your third drawing is good.You can improve her arms a bit and also her feet,her face is okay but still need's improvement,and her cleavage at the right side breast isn't drawn at the right way.Try to make it mach with the end of her clothing.
Your drawings are really good.I can see potential in your art,practice always and you'll eventually become the best.You should also watch anime so that you can get ideas on the proper way of drawing.


Thanks to you all for CnC.I'll try to put all these into practice and make the last one much better.