nice man, but its still not clear because of the primary drawing lines, u should color it or sth .

uploading coloured in pic now :D

nice dude, i love it

thx :D

Work on your heads and eyes
y'know what, i think you should work on over all face proportipons in general.

ye im working on that... i think ill try with something not human.. like a rock or a flower....

He's Brain must be massive, because he's forehead is HUUUUGE!! Either that or the eyes are way too low. I kind of find the smoothing a bit annoying, especially when there is such a rough outline.