This is my 2nd art

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Frozensoft

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May 15, 2012 10:09 PM #657320
Hey there I took your guys advice on the limbs and shading, and voila!!! hope you like it, I havent added effects yet so if you got some advice on how to improve it that would be great! Keep in mind this is my second artwork and I have only been using flash for a week now.
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Patt The ODST

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May 15, 2012 10:12 PM #657325
arms have no elbows

Let's start there.
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May 15, 2012 10:14 PM #657327
work on your anatomy. especially arms and fingers.
also, work on your eyes, and it wouldnt hurt to have a little something more than a gradient in the background
also, work on your shading
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May 15, 2012 10:31 PM #657342
hmm well that is a problem...I prolly need those..
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May 15, 2012 10:34 PM #657345
Quote from Drone
work on your anatomy. especially arms and fingers.
also, work on your eyes, and it wouldnt hurt to have a little something more than a gradient in the background
also, work on your shading


thanks for the input! the small picture doesnt show all the shading I did so Im not sure where else to put the shading, I'll work on that background and put some scenery in, what else are you looking for on the eyes.
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May 15, 2012 10:52 PM #657362
Please, save your images as a PNG, not JPG.
Jpeg looks really cruddy
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May 15, 2012 10:53 PM #657366
Quote from Kizunami
Please, save your images as a PNG, not JPG.
Jpeg looks really cruddy


Thanks! I was wondering why it turned out so bad!
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May 15, 2012 10:56 PM #657370
I have that problem a lot lol
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May 15, 2012 10:58 PM #657371
I just saved the image as a png and then uploaded it but then it called it a jpeg the new one has been uploaded..
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May 15, 2012 11:01 PM #657374
oh my just forget all my replies its all good now
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May 16, 2012 1:45 AM #657469
dont double post ^^
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May 16, 2012 4:57 AM #657507
lolz ^^ what he said