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May 26, 2012 4:15 AM #663352
Dark
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Abilities:
Normal mode
1.Rapidly fires 200 mini fireballs that are ghost like
2.Can disappear from matter for a split second
3.Solid objects that are not weapons and ores,bullets go straight through him.
Rage Mode
1.can turn giant
2.Fires 20 mini fireballs so fast you can't see them, fireballs explode
3.Disappears from matter and pops up somewhere else
4.Creates weapons out of his fire
5.Fires combined lazors out of his eyes that when on contact release a poisonous gas.

Weakness
He is weak to diamonds because they are a solid solid object that will not pass through him and
contains his fire.

Back story
As a kid Dark's dad was killed in a fire accident that
everyone that lived by him started just to get rid of him.
ever since he has been mastering fire beyond control in order
to destroy everything to show his hatred to everything.

Demo
http://fc04.deviantart.net/fs70/f/2012/146/f/6/my_rhg_character_by_crazyc0y0te-d518ish.gif

Battles:0/0
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May 26, 2012 4:59 AM #663369
200, 000 fireballs? Solid objects go straight through him? Turns giant? Oh, but it's okay because he can be hurt by diamonds. I think you might need to rework your character Crazycoyote.
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May 26, 2012 6:59 AM #663432
Quote from Dogface
200, 000 fireballs? Solid objects go straight through him? Turns giant? Oh, but it's okay because he can be hurt by diamonds. I think you might need to rework your character Crazycoyote.


Totally agree.

Also try to get the picture 150x150 and put it in this thread, but only your picture, not your demo ;)

Oh and try to make the layout better, if its all like typed normally right under each other it looks rushed -_-
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May 26, 2012 8:38 AM #663473
your picture must 150X150 and fix your picture because he has a long neck
and the demo is just a picture ^^
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May 26, 2012 2:24 PM #663716
working on fixing some things like how many fireballs he fires
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May 26, 2012 2:28 PM #663718
gonna fix it. it was around 11:00 last night and i was tired.
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May 26, 2012 2:34 PM #663722
Needs ALOT of work.You should have practiced more first.This can be alot better.I hope to see some fairly decent battles from you.
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May 26, 2012 2:38 PM #663723
Quote from caliph777
your picture must 150X150 and fix your picture because he has a long neck
and the demo is just a picture ^^


Fixed the problem.
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May 26, 2012 2:40 PM #663724
Quote from KidZane
Needs ALOT of work.You should have practiced more first.This can be alot better.I hope to see some fairly decent battles from you.


I've been only animating for 2 weeks so eventually i will get better over time.
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May 26, 2012 2:50 PM #663730
first stop double posting.second I SAID that u should have practiced first
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May 26, 2012 3:09 PM #663740
I wonder.... Are you even using flash, easytoon or in the worst case for RHG : pivot? It simply looks like multiple pictures put after each other for me....

Also, i've only been animating for 2 weeks too, but my results are better (no offense). If you didn't use any animating programs, i suggest u get one and watch some tutorials (but first learn about all tools before watching effects tutorials o.O)
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May 26, 2012 3:50 PM #663775
seems op..
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May 26, 2012 5:55 PM #663867
Picture needs to be 150x150.
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