Kicks and ground controlling powers. (Test/short)

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May 26, 2012 10:21 PM #664068
I was a tad bored, so I made this. Please CnC ;)

http://www.fileize.com/view/16cd1d59-4d0/
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May 26, 2012 11:59 PM #664099
The jump and the stomp look awkward. The jump, it's like he pops his arms out of socket, and the stomp it's like he fully extended his leg as a slow kick or something then stomped. Try stomping and look how your leg is bent until you force it to the ground. Now try it fully extended then stomping. It looks rly awkward. O.0
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May 27, 2012 12:07 AM #664106
He spins during the jump. I think I might wanna have to work on coreography and how sticks move during fighting. Thanks for the comment. :)
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May 28, 2012 2:47 AM #664990
Try having him spin in the direction he's moving.
This may or may not work for you.

I liked the intensity of the jumping and the after landing.
The rest was a bit difficult to watch.

In any case, good job, keep working on your movements.