.: REBELLION :.

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Mar 4, 2013 5:06 PM #904072
aw SHIT HAPPY LATE BIRTHDAY XERO.... SORRY I MISSED IT AND 9RHwioegrOHGIERGLOFJ
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Mar 5, 2013 4:56 AM #904609
oh it's due on Mark 15
I might actually make it!
(goes back to dorm and sleep my ass off)
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Mar 5, 2013 6:06 PM #905027
WANNA SEE THEM ENTRIES!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Mar 5, 2013 6:10 PM #905031
My tryout is COMPLETE!

Here it is!

Before you play the animation i would like to apologize for double play buttons but i did it to minimize lag and frame loss.
I got tired of using my rhg so i used one of my favorite anime character,Roronoa Zoro from One Piece.
My earlier tryout which i finished about 2 weeks ago (or so) was done solely in 2d so i decided to change it up this time even though i don't do much angles.
Hope you enjoy!
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Mar 5, 2013 6:23 PM #905040
That's pretty good man, though I did have some trouble keeping up with what was going on.
Tryout taken into account, let's get some more!
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Mar 5, 2013 6:52 PM #905063
Quote from Malregima
oh it's due on Mark 15
I might actually make it!
(goes back to dorm and sleep my ass off)

Story of my life.
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Mar 5, 2013 7:14 PM #905091
it's due on MA15
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Mar 5, 2013 7:18 PM #905096
Quote from Mranimator15
it's due on MA15

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Btw my tryout is about 45 % done. Hopefully Ill finish is tommorow, if a miracle happens, today :O
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Mar 5, 2013 10:26 PM #905286
Quote from Challenge
My tryout is COMPLETE!

Here it is!

Before you play the animation i would like to apologize for double play buttons but i did it to minimize lag and frame loss.
I got tired of using my rhg so i used one of my favorite anime character,Roronoa Zoro from One Piece.
My earlier tryout which i finished about 2 weeks ago (or so) was done solely in 2d so i decided to change it up this time even though i don't do much angles.
Hope you enjoy!


I like it and I like your style. But just as Xero said, it was hard to follow. I think you should have made the angles a bit smoother and added some more action but other than that, nicely done!
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Mar 6, 2013 4:26 AM #905660
Wow suddenly I feel inadequate...I wish I had flash..
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Mar 6, 2013 10:45 AM #905909
Thanks guys.
I just hope I'm up to the standards and what not.
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Mar 6, 2013 11:39 AM #905953
always for me.
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Mar 6, 2013 9:46 PM #906499
http://www.fileize.com/view/f43d8b14-6da/
my tryout c:

the animation is finished but the credits are rushed(will fix that) and I still need to put the "Rebellion Tryout" text in it. Unfortunetly
I cant to it today but I will do it tommorow c:

First time actually using angles, if you can call thoose angles :P
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Mar 6, 2013 10:06 PM #906521
Quote from JanRavnik
http://www.fileize.com/view/f43d8b14-6da/
my tryout c:

the animation is finished but the credits are rushed(will fix that) and I still need to put the "Rebellion Tryout" text in it. Unfortunetly
I cant to it today but I will do it tommorow c:

First time actually using angles, if you can call thoose angles :P


Hmm.. This is a very good tryout, I just want to say you made a verryy good try, you can tell there was effort put into it

My criticism:

I reckon you could have managed a better job on the start, because the song has a fast beat you could have made it 'straight to the point' and add more fighting and crud

There was a bit of a tween glitch right before the countdown that could have been fixed

The faces could have had a little more life to them than just a petty pan to the left and right

You could have added a background (even if it was a lazy one at best)

Overall the movements of the stick figures should have more ease and maybe be smoother in transition

There could have been a bigger climax to your RHG's faint, the physical activity didn't seem to be enough to take her out :c

And yes, the credits were rushed lol.

So yeah, again good try and good luck.
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Mar 6, 2013 11:09 PM #906590
Cool animations, Challenge and JanRavnik. c:
Come on people, keep those tryouts coming!

Also...

Congrats to Xero on becoming a moderator of the entire Show Off section of the forums!