Bored so I made this

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Jun 1, 2012 11:32 AM #668106
EDIT: I redid the symbols and cleaned up some shadings.
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OVERPOWEREDNESS!!!
Rosie's new sword inspired me to make this. Part boredom, part inspiration leads you to do great things O.o I should be bored more often.

Anyways, The sword is supposed to be a great sword, that as light as a normal knife, I made a stickman posing for comparison, he is also the wielder of these swords, named Warling. (More on him later.) The sword can also do energy attacks.

I have no name for the sword yet, so any suggestions?

CnC for the sword. thanks.
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Jun 1, 2012 11:38 AM #668110
The symbols on the sword are too thick and distracting. They dont blend well with the whole thing
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Jun 1, 2012 11:39 AM #668111
thats very cool
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Jun 1, 2012 11:42 AM #668113
I inspired you? Wow, I'm quiet shocked, actually.
I think the black parts of the gradient should be a lighter grey. Other than that, I like it :)
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Jun 1, 2012 11:46 AM #668116
Rosie, stare at it for at least 30 seconnds and you'll notice its flaws
Nanite
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Jun 1, 2012 11:50 AM #668117
@Kizunami it's flaws, like the handle's shadings.
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Jun 1, 2012 12:00 PM #668119
Not bad, I think you should get rid of the blur/drop shadow/whatever it is, it doesn't look too pretty the way it leaves the sword
The symbols don't look too good, I think they stand out too much.
I'm not sure what the yellow part is, is it a ribbon or something?
and the gradients, as Rosie said.

It's not too bad, though, but I think you can do better.
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Jun 1, 2012 10:59 PM #668416
The symbols dont fit at all.
Maybe if they were a different color..
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Jun 2, 2012 1:57 AM #668521
Quote from Drone
The symbols dont fit at all.


Yeah, definitely, I'm gonna change the symbols later. I've got stuff in my head.

EDIT: I changed the runes on the sword, it blends better now.
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Jun 2, 2012 2:06 AM #668524
your trying to mega kill somebody XD