Stick Page Forums Archive

Small combo

Started by: killeq | Replies: 21 | Views: 1,300

killeq

Posts: 170
Joined: Apr 2008
Rep: 10

View Profile
Apr 30, 2008 4:19 PM #126381
Just a small combo I've been making the past hour.
antiup.net/view.php?id=49410715710Combo%201.swf
.Aklemo.
2

Posts: 1,437
Joined: Jun 2007
Rep: 10

View Profile
Apr 30, 2008 4:38 PM #126388
http://antiup.net/view.php?id=49410715710Combo%201.swf

Pretty good moves, physics need a little bit of work. Shadow was kinda wierd, keep practising.
Drifts
2

Posts: 1,031
Joined: Nov 2007
Rep: 10

View Profile
Apr 30, 2008 5:11 PM #126405
infact i luv ur style its so unique
sleepydan

Posts: 0
Joined: Jul 2025
Apr 30, 2008 5:23 PM #126409
Thats quite cool! I have to agree though the shadows a little dodgy.
killeq

Posts: 170
Joined: Apr 2008
Rep: 10

View Profile
Apr 30, 2008 6:18 PM #126438
Quote from sleepydan
Thats quite cool! I have to agree though the shadows a little dodgy.


What exactly is wrong with the shadow?
And thanks and stuff.
New Generation
Banned

Posts: 1,713
Joined: Mar 2007
Rep: 10

View Profile
Apr 30, 2008 6:59 PM #126461
It's too blurred. Make it more transparent and no blur at all.
.Aklemo.
2

Posts: 1,437
Joined: Jun 2007
Rep: 10

View Profile
Apr 30, 2008 6:59 PM #126462
It's all blurred only, and it's not blurred right, not does it have the correct amount of blur. Also, you need to Alpha the shadows, to atleast 30%.

EDIT: Damn James, you beat me to it. >=3
killeq

Posts: 170
Joined: Apr 2008
Rep: 10

View Profile
Apr 30, 2008 7:04 PM #126465
Quote from .Aklemo.
It's all blurred only, and it's not blurred right, not does it have the correct amount of blur. Also, you need to Alpha the shadows, to atleast 30%.

EDIT: Damn James, you beat me to it. >=3

Mmk, sounds logical..
New Generation
Banned

Posts: 1,713
Joined: Mar 2007
Rep: 10

View Profile
Apr 30, 2008 7:04 PM #126466
Haha,lol. Too bad >:)

Same time thought, but not the same seconds.. >.>
Omega
2

Posts: 1,852
Joined: Sep 2007
Rep: 10

View Profile
May 1, 2008 1:56 AM #126770
Despite the slightly choppy flip, it's well eased and smooth.
Blood was alright; it could linger longer.

You don't have to fix the shadow if you don't want to. I recommend it though.
Good job.
Miccool

Posts: 1,128
Joined: Jul 2006
Rep: 10

View Profile
May 1, 2008 1:59 AM #126773
Yeah, shadow's rather distracting.. Maybe blur less and put more transparency? The animation is well made though.
Clutch
2

Posts: 539
Joined: Mar 2007
Rep: 10

View Profile
May 1, 2008 2:55 AM #126807
SHITSHITSHIT

I haven't seen someone with so much potential and an awesome style since god knows when. keep animating dude, you will great very very soon.
killeq

Posts: 170
Joined: Apr 2008
Rep: 10

View Profile
May 1, 2008 10:08 AM #126987
Quote from Clutch
SHITSHITSHIT

I haven't seen someone with so much potential and an awesome style since god knows when. keep animating dude, you will great very very soon.

Terkoiz, Tentionmaru, Miccool, Cicada and all the other great animators don't have a great style:P?
Anyways, thank you very much.
And now I look at it, I really hate the shadow..
mraznbuddy
2

Posts: 607
Joined: Aug 2007
Rep: 10

View Profile
May 1, 2008 11:57 PM #127294
heh i can tell you've been watching some nice animators (or stalking)

you're pretty good at animating, everything seemed great, nice anticipation, only thing I think you would need is maybe a better explosion sound (or an overall sound pack) and fixing shadow like everyone else said lol. you have a pretty nice style too.

how long have you been animating?
killeq

Posts: 170
Joined: Apr 2008
Rep: 10

View Profile
May 4, 2008 6:17 PM #128820
Quote from mraznbuddy
heh i can tell you've been watching some nice animators (or stalking)

you're pretty good at animating, everything seemed great, nice anticipation, only thing I think you would need is maybe a better explosion sound (or an overall sound pack) and fixing shadow like everyone else said lol. you have a pretty nice style too.

how long have you been animating?


2 years.. And I lost my sounds in a virus rampagee ;_;
Website Version: 1.0.4
© 2025 Max Games. All rights reserved.