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My thrid Animation...something...feels weird about this one...

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Jun 23, 2012 12:05 AM #682895
http://www.fileize.com/view/234ec1f4-476/

Ughhh somethings bother me about it, but i dont know what >.<

CnC required :(
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Jun 23, 2012 1:11 AM #682921
Your third animation... is... pretty good...

Just that in the final bit, when the blue guy slides backwards, it appears slightly odd, and drawing just about four more frames for that would have fixed that.
The combo was good, at least what I could see of it with those smexeh effects getting in the way. It flowed pretty well, but just seemed to lack enough force. I can't seem to pinpoint a reason for that.
Effects are great, and I don't see how you can improve on that because i'm a lazy piece of shit who doesn't use effects at all.
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Jun 23, 2012 2:07 AM #682950
The first cam zoom last too long. Also it sounds...idk...quiet, it definitely needs more !umpf! Energy flames thing needs more blast into it instead of just the hum. As was previously stated, the blue guy's sliding motion lasts too long. It looks to be as if he was on ice.
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Jun 23, 2012 2:20 AM #682956
Lol, i always make my Vcam zoom long xD habit of mine.

But yeah, im really lacking sound effects that i wanted, so this animation is indeed pretty quite. And ive fixed the blue guys movement already.

Thanks for the input guys
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