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pls comment on my animation

Love the setting you got there. I like your style, how the dude does his kinda punches and kicks, I think it looks cool. You're choreography is great, and the combos seem to flow well and look clear. One thing I would work on is adding more fps and then sort of "easing" movements, punches, and kicks. I definitely see some potential from you here.

choppy. . .
practice on high Fps. .
and also put attention on effects. .
overall good job ^^

tnx btw

but what is choppy

i agree to dk its kinda choppy. try to practice more. ;) its good tho

can anybody tel me what choppy mean

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can anybody tel me what choppy mean

Choppy means that it isn't smooth. It's what you get at low fps.

Choppy means the animation doesn't flow well into the next motion. It's resolved by putting up the FPS or doing more in-between frames

Quote from drone

choppy means the animation doesn't flow well into the next motion. It's resolved by putting up the fps or doing more in-between frames

Quote from tsukubane

choppy means that it isn't smooth. It's what you get at low fps.

tnx for the tip but i use 24 fps
what do you guys recomend for the fps

@silver101 : then maybe you shouldn't use double frames too much .

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@silver101 : then maybe you shouldn't use double frames too much .

k tnx it really helps

I agree with DanMark, your moves are good but don't use too many double frames (or increase the FPS), it seems to be slow, and it ruins the first one reaction.
You can improve your blood effects, I think you did them quickly because, the stickfigure doesn't have blood particles at the end, next time take your time and animate them step by step.
However you have good skills, great work.

tnx ill do that