BlueX
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BlueX
Pic:
Abilities :
have the power of fire and electric
Weaknesses :
Water Because when the electricity hit him would shock and When exposed to fire would be extinguished
Story :
He comes from the remote town he was 18 he got a fire and electrical power from his father when his father died and he was very sad and he wanted to join the RHG to fight with others
Demo :
http://www.fileize.com/view/cc55fdb4-7b6/
http://www.fileize.com/view/d15c38c6-33a/ < New Demo
Battels :
not yet
Points :
0/0
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View Profile thats not even a story.. thats a description.
you need to make a proper story add things like
-where he is from
-how he got his powers
-why he joined RHG
stuff like that
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View Profile Would ya like to battle? ._.
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View Profile Would ya like to battle? ._.
Sorry I can't ._.
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