[SP] Just a lake and some rocks...

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Jul 27, 2012 3:49 PM #705909
1h15 speed painting.

http://shynzo-nai.deviantart.com/art/SP-Just-a-lake-and-some-rocks-Time-Lapse-Video-317330858

See the making of the picture here: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=-I_BBgOwdZQ&feature=youtu.be
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Jul 27, 2012 3:52 PM #705910
Looks good, but the shading and shaping on the rocks is off. The rocks to the right seem too pale, whereas the rocks on the left are too round. If you want to make round rocks, go ahead, just make sure you shade accordingly and brush in a circular pattern so that you're not giving the sphere a polygonal perspective. Good work though.
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Jul 27, 2012 3:59 PM #705912
Thanks for the fair criticism, mister Cook.
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Jul 27, 2012 4:36 PM #705937
I think it's fine, but it could have done better without the slanted mountains in the backround on the left
the only other thing is that the rock arch part seems too connected to the other parts, it seems to smooth. It would look better if it was more coarse and maybe had more defining lines IMO
this really good work, I like the style. Try making extremely simple objects and adding a lot of detail as practice. I think it would look nice~
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Jul 27, 2012 4:42 PM #705940
This looks really, really nice. I watched the video. I would've thought that it was done in watercolor, so I was surprised that you did it on the computer.
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Jul 27, 2012 7:17 PM #706061
Well, well! :D
Thank you all for the comments and the critics!