Unfinished RHG Demo *CnC* *Not Choppy*

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Jul 29, 2012 11:40 AM #707048
Please give me some CnC. I worked really hard not to make it choppy. Im not sure about easing, but I worked my butt off!
http://www.fileize.com/view/f605a21a-d7b/
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Jul 29, 2012 11:48 AM #707051
i think the music didn't really fit with the animation, i also think you should have used different's colors for the blueish stick figures when they run, because the colors are kinda flowing into echother and then it geting hard to see what's actually is going on, i also see a bit resizing here and there, but overall good job, keep it up :P
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Jul 29, 2012 1:20 PM #707104
Quote from FocusFa
i think the music didn't really fit with the animation, i also think you should have used different's colors for the blueish stick figures when they run, because the colors are kinda flowing into echother and then it geting hard to see what's actually is going on, i also see a bit resizing here and there, but overall good job, keep it up :P


Thankyou so much! You inspire me :) I'll fix it right now. EDIT: Here is the new one :D

Pewdiepie FTW http://www.fileize.com/view/30cd055c-03c/
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Jul 29, 2012 1:53 PM #707125
Heads?
Background?
The rest?
Intro is ok. after that the stickfigures run you can clearly see that all the stick figures have the same loop, try to fix that because it come really lazy over to me meaning you should make a different loop per stick figure. after that he goes into battle you make the stick figure resize a lot like focus said. maybe remove the whole scene and start over? Do you use the grid? When you do the slowmotion jumpish thing you can see that you made a movieclip of every limb, but it looks like its getting detached while he jumps.. change the center dot (that white little dot in the center of your movieclip,graphic or button) to the end of the limb.

I hope it helped you, now finish it. :)
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Jul 29, 2012 1:59 PM #707127
Quote from poppetje3D
Heads?
Background?
The rest?
Intro is ok. after that the stickfigures run you can clearly see that all the stick figures have the same loop, try to fix that because it come really lazy over to me meaning you should make a different loop per stick figure. after that he goes into battle you make the stick figure resize a lot like focus said. maybe remove the whole scene and start over? Do you use the grid? When you do the slowmotion jumpish thing you can see that you made a movieclip of every limb, but it looks like its getting detached while he jumps.. change the center dot (that white little dot in the center of your movieclip,graphic or button) to the end of the limb.

I hope it helped you, now finish it. :)


I am not gonna remove the entire scene, but I will fix the slow motion and fix the loop. EDIT: I cant move the little center dot D= EDIT: I figured out how, but the lines came apart so I decided not to. I added some stuff, here is what I have: http://www.fileize.com/view/ab73141b-36f/
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Jul 29, 2012 9:55 PM #707477
ok the animation was good but the things that bother me is that the main guy changes his color when he is fighting.and also there is a green guy pointing at him but there is no green guy in the animation.other than that is good