BLaze

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Aug 4, 2012 5:21 PM #711178
Blaze
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Abilities:
Blazes the ability to breath and shoot fire from his mouth add his hands, i wouldn't get to close

Weakness:
BLazes weakness is water but he has never come over a water elementer

About:
Blaze was stuck in a house and inhaled to much smoke and gained the power of fire and is now looking for the people who burned his house down.......

Demo:
http://www.fileize.com/view/77a60942-9b8/

Battles:
N/A

Points:
0/0
ninjaman
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Aug 4, 2012 5:42 PM #711196
Wouldn't you die from that? From breathing smoke? Or is he just plain abnormal? This story is incoherent.
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Aug 4, 2012 8:18 PM #711232
nice avatar, but you lack practice and also improves informacion.Te recommend that before you upload your animations give a review for errors okay :D
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Aug 5, 2012 6:27 AM #711487
Nice RHG lewis, i see your using the avatar i made for yOu lol :p i like the idea of 'he can shoot fire out Of his mouth' good look with futer battles bro :p
But if i could give some Cnc i think you could imProve the story allitle, i also think he should have a few more weeknesses(thats just my opinion you dont have to)
Well thats all iv got, goood look buddy :D
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Aug 5, 2012 1:50 PM #711597
Very cool RHG dude. But, I would also recommend you change up the story a bit. Getting his powers from inhaling too much smoke seems a bit.... unreal and dull. But then again thats just my opinion.
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Aug 5, 2012 3:32 PM #711626
Why do people consistently say something along the lines of "great RHG" to posts that are riddled with grammar and spelling mistakes, have an infeasible and minimalistic story, and bring in powers that are neither original nor particular interesting? Oh, and your demo is really choppy and the stick has arm-loss as well as random teleporting. I'd suggest that you both A. Drastically modify this post and B. Work a bit more on your animating skills before you enter a RHG.
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Aug 5, 2012 5:43 PM #711693
Quote from AlphaCentaurus
Why do people consistently say something along the lines of "great RHG" to posts that are riddled with grammar and spelling mistakes, have an infeasible and minimalistic story, and bring in powers that are neither original nor particular interesting?


You do have a point Alpha. But what I meant was that the idea of his RHG is cool. His demo does need work and he should improve before battling. But it can be difficult for an idea to be original since almost everything has been done. Although, if he takes this idea and puts his own flare into it and makes his fire-breather have a unique style then I think thats original enough to be a good RHG.
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Aug 5, 2012 8:39 PM #711768
Why does pretty much every single rhg want revenge?!
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Aug 5, 2012 9:02 PM #711789
Quote from Sh0tgun
Why does pretty much every single rhg want revenge?!


Welp, mine doesn't :3
Anyway, I'm not fond of the use of fire powers, since it's used so much, IMO it'd be better to have a power rarely used/not used before.
Good luck.