Quick Pokemon Fight

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Aug 6, 2012 12:28 PM #712120
Whoever said Caterpie sucked?!?

http://img703.imageshack.us/img703/3775/pokemonfightfinal.gif

Comments would be lovely.
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Aug 6, 2012 12:59 PM #712131
i never thought of it that way...
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Aug 10, 2012 9:10 AM #715045
two things, read the pivot tuts(tutorial if you dont know) and post in the beginners thread....
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Aug 10, 2012 1:29 PM #715171
How about you actually tell me what you think was wrong with it and I have read them. And barely anybody gives you comments in the beginners thread.
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Aug 10, 2012 1:39 PM #715175
If you want criticism then here ya go.

First off I agree with Javelin, you should probably take a easing tutorials and use a higher FPS. Your animations will come out less choppy.
-Instead of using a static outline of caterpede or whatever you should instead maybe make a body in pivot. Maybe multiple green circles connected smallest to biggest and there dynamic so you can edit the pokemons movements in a more creative matter. The outline looks weird. If you just made a more dynamic thing then this animation would be much more enjoyable.
-Work on the movements, the stickman (Offensive) looks to skip his movements here and there. For example the flip, the grabbing of the string, etc.


Btw, reason why people don't really give to much criticism in the beginner boards is probably caused by the fact that any animator can easily improve just by reading/watching the tuts. They have almost everything there to improve the needed skills. Especially for pivot.

I could see why people would ask direct questions for flash though, gets complicated sometimes...

Hoped this helped, try and improve. Liked the concept of the animation though. l(^o^)l
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Aug 10, 2012 2:52 PM #715232
Thanks for the feedback. I usually animate on 19fps and I'll work on making my movements more fluid constant.
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Aug 10, 2012 7:30 PM #715372
Alright, well keep it up because I honestly liked this animation. It was pretty creative :D