was on vacation and jus coming back... so my first anim since I came back -

http://www.fileize.com/view/e183960f-123/


cnc also please

needs more flow, on the last slash it would have been better if he didnt slice upwards and when just have his cleaver stop there and come back down, Makes it look really stop and go. Might have been better for it to continue going and do like a spin so his movement wouldn't just stop all together. Also there was little blood even though they were cut in half and the blood could have looked more liquidy

thanks :3 I understand everything you said, appreciate it, I hope to correct my mistakes my next time

I like it. nuff said

It's kind of stop-and-go. It needs to flow more. Also, I feel like the cleaver is too stiff, if you will. It needs to rotate more in his hands. Very nice besides that though. Keep it up.

Obase why'd you change your style up?
And the blood looked very rushed for someone of your ability.
Still aright though.

I don't like how the vcam, in the middle of the anim, shifts to above his knees. but its not bad