Della

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VDanger

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Aug 7, 2012 7:51 AM #712765
Della
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Power: Ice,Scythe
Weaknesses: Hot Things.(Fire, Lava...)
Story:
She lived in north pole.Her father is the leader of their little camp and he trained her using the scythe until she aged to 14 then a group of pillagers attacked their village.Then her father told her to run away then she gone.Her father is died.She is joined RHG for be strong for take revenge of her father.
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[swf=http://www.fluidanims.com/rhg/swf/5438demo22.swf]http://www.fluidanims.com/rhg/swf/5438demo22.swf[/swf]
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Strike

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Aug 7, 2012 8:07 AM #712768
" She lived in North pole. Her father is the leader of their little camp and he trained her using the scythe until she gotten 14 when a group of pillagers attacked their village. Her father told her to run away and she was gone. Her father died and she joined RHG to become strong so she could take her revenge. "

Put this in your story, since you've got "bad english" as your signature says - I decided to rewrite it. Hopefully, I didn't do many mistakes.

Good luck with your RHG.
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Aug 7, 2012 11:12 AM #712824
lol bad english
nice RHG :3
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Aug 7, 2012 12:42 PM #712876
We should battle.