I think the sword thrower should bend his arm more before the throw and the guy getting hit didn't seem to be reacting properly to the impact. Although the slow motion was a good.
Something more exotic. Pull off something flashy that really shows off what you can do, that way we can see what you're good at and not so good at and give you CC accordingly.
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....read the pivot tuts....
Also, this isn't an applicable answer whenever anyone asks for criticism. You should know by now that nothing is as good as actual feedback.
Please, try to be more constructive.
