let's get some pencil drawings up in this bitch oh yeah

samurai looking guy:
http://covalence.deviantart.com/#/d5biwb9

upperclassman:
http://covalence.deviantart.com/#/d5biwxq

please excuse my poor scanner
for the most part i have an idea of what could be wrong with them but i still greatly appreciate comments~~~~~

Not bad man. I'd suggest drawing on a bigger scale though, you can draw more details that way.
Here's what's wrong for the most part.

Samurai guy- Right shoulder looks dislocated, left arm a tad too long, center of balance seems a bit off because of the leg placement, head is a bit small/ strangely shaped. That symbol on his clothes is amazing btw. (lol)

Upperclassmen- The crotch is too high, his pose with the leg thing looks odd, strange head shape with the cheekbone, ear too high... okay I'm just gonna stop, lol.

There's a lot of little things wrong that could be easily corrected, so I shouldn't really bother since you probably know most of this.
Good work, keep practicing.

alrighty then
i think i'll probably do some head studies for the next couple of days, then some anatomy work afterward

thanks for holding up to your promise and commenting lololol