http://www.fileize.com/view/8ba0791b-006/
My English is not good, so my grammar errors do not mind.
This is my first full animation, and I want to use it to test my level
This animation has many faults, the end of some scribbled
I hope you can help me point out more disadvantages to help me progress. Thank you.

Damn son, you've got talent. The animation is pretty smooth, good angles...as far as criticism is concerned, I felt that the animation was a bit slow at parts, but honestly it was pretty solid. Good work.

Whooaaa, extremely nice. Very extremely nice.

nice..hehehe

Very smooth and nice. Impressive angles - keep it up! The only thing that bothered me enough to post it was the sound quality, you should change your publish settings to something higher. Like from "fast" to "best" and from "16kbps" to "64kbps". If you don't understand, here's a tutorial on how to improve your sound quality.

amazing.

Thanks for your advice and the tutorial ~:)

hey dude plain awesome I loved it

:O.....you...my friend.....have talent...

Wow...just...wow. That was amazing.

That was..............................
AWESOME!!!!!!!!!!!! I LOVE YOU MAMEN!! I REALLY-REALLY-REALLY LOVE YOU MAMEN!!!!!!!!