A Stick Fight Animation! (Mac2k)

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May 8, 2008 11:37 AM #131664
Here is another animation that I made. It is a fight that I just did, it took me alot of time.
http://i182.photobucket.com/albums/x141/Jit_13/stickfight1.gif

C&C and also rate me.
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May 8, 2008 12:21 PM #131676
Umm... Could you C&C and maybe rate me?
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May 8, 2008 12:25 PM #131679
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Umm... Could you C&C and maybe rate me?

its too slow, and not much to rate on.


maybe you should try with a faster frame rate?
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May 8, 2008 1:17 PM #131706
Slow? Does'nt look slow on mine. Must be the Gif.
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May 8, 2008 1:40 PM #131710
i cant even see it cuz im posting from school, but it doesnt look like many people are helping, so when i get back i can rate and C&C you. but i guess from these comments i can see that you should post in the beginners thread, and read a few tutorials.
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May 8, 2008 6:25 PM #131772
Theres Only Room For One Us In This Town !
Mac2k!!!!!
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May 8, 2008 7:14 PM #131780
ok ive just seen it, and it wasnt as bad as i thought it would be. work on the jerkyness, and use more easing then go from there.
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May 8, 2008 8:52 PM #131795
Okay thanx, jrockpunk1.
I never knew there was a mac2k...
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May 8, 2008 10:44 PM #131934
it looked good 2 me
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May 9, 2008 9:43 PM #132414
Thanks, Justavious. Could you rate me
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May 9, 2008 10:44 PM #132477
WOOOOO ANUDDER PHOTOBUCKET USER

and it is very good, but a little slow, the big kick near the end looked a bit weird to me, and as he throws him off screen, it goes a little choppy, but it looks ok otherwise. better than i could do lol
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May 10, 2008 8:56 AM #132843
Ok..

You picked the right sticks and you got the right skills to use the sticks so..bravo on it.I also got to say..Have you ever actually studied science or either speed.Because you have to make it faster.The previous comments with out crits are the ones who can't animate as good as you and dosen't really know how to post.

You only have to be more cartoonic and also have to master the speed of realistic or even not realistic movements.Your frame speed is just alright.My tip..Add more frames (as in about 3-4) before punches and kicks or any other blows or attacks edit:When you jump and fall don't you think in the middle of the air just right when you fall you slow down?try adding more frames when you want to start landing just right after starting a jump.Try 1 frame for movements because it makes it look faster and you have to make small gaps (this does not effect the ``Add more frames,'' part.Search for my post at the bigginers section..

small edit to tips:After you attack and hit the opponent.Take about 2-3 frames before doing any movements when you finished your blow.Btw when you find my animation at the bigginers thread which is in http://www.stickpageportal.com/forums/showthread.php?p=1235607#post1235607 there..ok? the link..Go on it and see my animation.You can see and understand what I was typing above in an example.
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May 10, 2008 9:20 AM #132858
Hey I liked it! Would be better though, if you made it longer..
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May 10, 2008 10:09 AM #132876
i liked it.i liked the movements.make it longer.NO1 HAS 2 AGREE WITH ME!
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May 10, 2008 10:55 AM #132897
Thanks alot stickmaycry, I'll keep that in mind. I saw your anim and I like the cartoony style. Very good. It looked kind of stiff though, but good.
Maybe I'll continue my animation. I'll start right now.