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Have I improved?

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Rosie

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Sep 15, 2012 8:03 PM #740057
http://www.fileize.com/view/469ebcb4-aa8/

Another un-rusting anim, idk if it's better than my last anim or not.....is it?

Also, Cnc please.
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Sep 15, 2012 8:08 PM #740063
Yeah, you did better than last time.
All I can say is pay closer attention when placing arms, especially after the last attack, it's like she's touching her leg with her arm for a moment.
I'd suggest keeping the other limbs clear from the attacking limb, so that the attack is very clear.
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Sep 15, 2012 8:08 PM #740064
honestly i have never seen you animate before but according to this, it isn't bad at all,
you really got most of the easing going on but its just that i find it a little confusing of what she did in the last moved at the end of the animation, but so far this is good :)
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Sep 15, 2012 8:12 PM #740066
Quote from Vincent - X
its just that i find it a little confusing of what she did in the last moved at the end of the animation, but so far this is good :)


I was going to continue into a series of punches, after getting the stick positioned, I thought that'd be enough for now, I tried to just have the stick slide into a standing position. lol

Unless you meant the last attack, it was supposed to be a high kick, but I didnt pay much attention to the arm positioning, like Cresent said, I'll be sure to keep a closer eye next time.

Thanks btw
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Sep 15, 2012 8:14 PM #740069
Nice but how dare you!!! get flash again and not speed battle mee ;o;
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Sep 15, 2012 8:15 PM #740071
It looks but it looks the same then what you usually do.But still awsome.
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Sep 15, 2012 8:15 PM #740072
Quote from Harleyg
Nice but how dare you!!! get flash again and not speed battle mee ;o;


Borrowing a friends for a few days :P
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Sep 15, 2012 8:17 PM #740073
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It looks nice but it can use work.


What could use work?
How's she going to learn from mistakes that she doesn't know about?
Unless you actually point out what needs work, and maybe how to improve, this comment was pretty much pointless.
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Sep 15, 2012 8:18 PM #740074
I actually liked it man calm down
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Sep 15, 2012 8:20 PM #740077
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I actually liked it man calm down


I am being calm, I'm calmly telling you a fact.
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Sep 15, 2012 8:20 PM #740078
hehe il let you off ;)
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Sep 15, 2012 8:21 PM #740079
Ok just my opinion no harm done right.
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Sep 15, 2012 8:25 PM #740082
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Ok just my opinion no harm done right.

You aren't comprehending what he's saying, obviously.

Anyway, nice job Rosie you've def improved. Your fluidity and power need some work though, and it was a little stop-and-go, but you're definitely breaking your rust pretty fast.
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Sep 15, 2012 8:43 PM #740095
I noticed that some of your attack recoils were off so I made this to help out...

http://www.fileize.com/view/3ab5af83-4e6/

Yurp, cuz I be so nice...
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Sep 15, 2012 9:14 PM #740107
I know what hes saying he wants me to have a reason and the reason is well i dont think shes improved but its still awsome I just beleive it looks the same then what she usually does
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