i battle with shadow, some how he did reply to my massage so i think it kind of waste of think so i post it in here soo you guy can what this http://www.fileize.com/view/103404aa-e20/
and some ine plz tell me how to turn the BBCODE on

really nice man...REALLY NICE !!!

tks well, it kind of waste of time :/

I like it but try to shorten your dialogue

U improved man!!! keep it up!!! :D

I really enjoyed it, nice animating. It seemed a bit sluggish though. Perhaps increase the FPS?

Dayum, learn english dude :) but your improving :)

Quote from Razor-Sharp

U improved man!!! keep it up!!! :D

it a month ago dude


thank guy

It was Ok, my only issue was that it was too long, it went to the point of dragging on, I begun to think "Is it over yet?" at a certain point. But you're improving, can't lie there.

Try to add less text, don't try to have a story behind it unless it can be easily showed by animation, with long conversations of text with motionless stick figures, gets kinda boring.