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Winter Veil - Interactive Story

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Oct 7, 2012 2:16 PM #753619
WINTER VEIL


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You are a boy named Jake. You live with your father and a pack of wolves who thinks you're their son. Luckily, you're okay with that, just like you are okay with a lot of things. Your lack of bulging muscles and forest-like chest hair indicates that you are not yet a man, but that would make sense since you are only 8 years old. You plan to be a man, just maybe not anytime soon. The responsibilities that come with being manly are too heavy, just like that tree that collapsed on your house.

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What do you do?


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"Whoa hold on to your horses!, What is this?"

It's an interactive story! You post a message below that includes a command and we'll see if it comes up!
But first, some things to go over.


Rules:

-Only 1 command allowed in between updates

-When I say command, I mean command. The purpose of this is for you to tell me an action, and I tell you what happens.
An example would be: I open the box.
An incorrect example is: I open the box and find a grenade.

-You cannot see/discover anything that is not pictured, or anything I do not tell you.

-If you post more than 2 actions, only the first one would be considered. If the extra actions are things that have been said before, then it will count as a "vote."

-Rules and Updates are ever-changing.


Updates

-I will execute any commands that are either most popular or is hilarious, but I will choose the one that moves the story along if it drags out.

-I will also try to execute multiple commands if they do not contradict.

-Updates will be posted when I feel like it.


I would love any feedback/criticism from you so I can improve this!

Well that's it. Enjoy!
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Oct 7, 2012 2:26 PM #753625
Go back home, (woops)

I really like the art work, it's so layed back.
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Oct 7, 2012 2:28 PM #753627
Take the signboard.
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Oct 7, 2012 3:43 PM #753684
have a relationship with the signboard
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Oct 7, 2012 3:44 PM #753685
Quote from Ghombeat
Take the signboard.

could come in good use!
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Oct 7, 2012 7:26 PM #753889
Mourn over lack of forest hair on chest.
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Oct 7, 2012 11:58 PM #754008
Quote from Reap4u
Mourn over lack of forest hair on chest.

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You would, but you're not feeling it right now.

Quote from Ghombeat
Take the signboard.

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You don't know what would you need it for, but you do so anyway.

Quote from R.D
Go back home

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Looks like you're locked out. You wish you had bulging muscles right now so you can smash down the door.


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Oct 8, 2012 12:00 AM #754009
Pass through the hole made by the three that fell on his house.
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Oct 8, 2012 5:34 AM #754166
Go around the back to check for open windows
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Oct 8, 2012 6:08 AM #754184
Check if anyone's home. If not, smash the window with the sign and climb in after scraping off the glass.
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Oct 8, 2012 2:32 PM #754425
Pick up a small lump of rubble and pocket it. I have a feeling it will come in useful later. Also what Devour said.
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Oct 8, 2012 3:28 PM #754459
force puberty on yourself
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Oct 8, 2012 4:21 PM #754486
use the sign as a weapon to threat who ever is there and take every thing he got...!
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Oct 8, 2012 4:30 PM #754492
Sit down and cry.
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Oct 8, 2012 5:48 PM #754558
Quote from Zed
Pick up a small lump of rubble and pocket it. I have a feeling it will come in useful later. Also what Devour said.

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You pick up the a small lump of rubble.

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You keep it in your hand, wishing you had pockets.

Quote from Ghombeat
Pass through the hole made by the three that fell on his house.

Quote from Irian
Go around the back to check for open windows

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There doesn't seem to be a hole you can fit through, just more pieces of your wall.

Quote from Devour
Check if anyone's home. If not, smash the window with the sign and climb in after scraping off the glass.

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You are absolutely sure your father is home. He is always home, preforming manly activities that you cannot do. You check anyways.

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You smash through the window. Look what you did! You just made a bigger mess! Oh boy, looks like you'd have to clean all this up later. There's a note on floor, and it turns out the door wasn't locked. It was just blocked by the dead body of yo-

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SAMSONNN!!! You are not okay with this. You are about to hunt down whatever force of nature that killed your favorite wolf. Well, one of your favorite wolves. Actually, you can't tell them apart. Oh well.


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