im just gonna leave this here http://www.fileize.com/view/3aa2ce5a-f87/

it is too fast and i did not feel the impact of the hits

its the cam :/ when i play it without the cam is smooth
ill take it off and show you

Lol this made me laugh. but it is a bit too fast. Other than that, to me it looks fine

All looks good, to be honest.
Particles look decent, movements are good, needs more easing I suppose. (Especially towards the end)
Other that that, it looks good.