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Jeus's FIRST attempt at Pivot

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Oct 10, 2012 8:53 PM #756253
"This is my first attempt at Pivot"
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Oct 10, 2012 9:25 PM #756273
Here my CnC:
It's smooth, but it's wobbly, the jump doesn't have enough anticipatiom, but the run has too much, the jump is strange and the steps are too near, anyway, it's a good "first attempt with pivot", also, remember, pratice make everyone better and nobody is perfect.

My tips:
-Use a guideline (a.k.a. simply background made with a line) next time, so your stick will not move around a totally blank background.
-Remove some useless frames (or make the FPS higher)
-study someone else's (maybe a pro animator that uses lines or pivot) anims
-pratice, don't be discouraged if your first attempts aren't what you wanted, everyone was (or is still) a noob/newbie
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Oct 10, 2012 10:05 PM #756287
Good, try flash and honor your divine-ness with true quality animation worthy of Jeus himself.
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Oct 10, 2012 10:09 PM #756289
I'm going to talk about easing, because I think your movements will just improve with practice. You seem to understand them pretty well for a beginner.

And when I say "talk about" I mean "link to a tutorial on" because otherwise there'd have been no point making it. http://forums.stickpage.com/showthread.php?28577-Easing-Everything-You-Need-To-Know
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Oct 12, 2012 5:21 AM #757378
"Thank you, and that was a great tutorial I have kept easing in mind when i made the animation but I didn't realize how important it was"
~Jeus Christ
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Oct 12, 2012 6:04 AM #757393
great job man it's a little slow but it's really good :D
a little practice should do the trick and remember "You Can Do It" :)
oh... of course you can. your Jeus :D
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Oct 12, 2012 6:17 AM #757397
movements need work also. if you try to run like that in real life, you'll fall over - the front foot should be further forward when stepping.
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Oct 27, 2012 9:46 PM #770807
its his first attempt on pivot.
you know, people who is new at pivot don't know easing. so yeh
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Oct 27, 2012 11:02 PM #770843
Quote from cookiedough
its his first attempt on pivot.
you know, people who is new at pivot don't know easing. so yeh
That is why we give people CONSTRUCTIVE CRITICISM.
Dumb-of-utmost-ass

Anyway, I see you have your frame-rate set to the default, I'd suggest upping it a little, I use 21-33 but that's a matter of preference. Zed's tutorial is a great one, worth the read and helps oh so much. I would also suggest wtfteam.com if you plan on animating pivot most of the time, since the pivot community on stickpage is alittle weak.
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Oct 27, 2012 11:17 PM #770854
Its good for a first attempt I mean your still learning and you get better as you go on. Heck my first attempt was a ball falling to the ground XD but everyone gets better
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Nov 5, 2012 1:31 AM #778601
Quote from mizu
That is why we give people CONSTRUCTIVE CRITICISM.
Dumb-of-utmost-ass

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