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As the sun rose, Alby rode down the long deserted highway on his bicycle.
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Oct 28, 2012 2:03 PM #771378
Oct 28, 2012 2:09 PM #771385
He slid to a stop when he noticed the road ahead had been blocked by a fallen tree.
Oct 28, 2012 2:12 PM #771387
hey thats was my idea ! :mad:
Oct 28, 2012 2:20 PM #771396
Quote from ShensureiHe slid to a stop when he noticed the road ahead had been blocked by a fallen tree.
But when he get out of the car, he noticed that the bridge ahead was destroyed by the flooding river.
Oct 28, 2012 2:22 PM #771400
And then Alby realised that godzilla is real.
Oct 28, 2012 2:29 PM #771406
Since the above sentences do not relate to the previous ones, I am skipping over them.
As the sun rose, Alby rode down the long deserted highway on his bicycle. He slid to a stop when he noticed the road ahead had been blocked by a fallen tree. He realized that it was not hard to get around the fallen tree, so he went off-road on his bicycle.
As the sun rose, Alby rode down the long deserted highway on his bicycle. He slid to a stop when he noticed the road ahead had been blocked by a fallen tree. He realized that it was not hard to get around the fallen tree, so he went off-road on his bicycle.
Oct 28, 2012 2:33 PM #771411
Alby always loved riding through that place, looking at the tall trees and wild grass...
Oct 28, 2012 2:34 PM #771413
As the sun rose, Alby rode down the long deserted highway on his bicycle. He slid to a stop when he noticed the road ahead had been blocked by a fallen tree. He realized that it was not hard to get around the fallen tree, so he went off-road on his bicycle. Alby always loved riding through that place, looking at the tall trees and wild grass. He rode down that same road every morning, but this morning was different.
Oct 28, 2012 2:38 PM #771415
The fallen trees were lying everywhere, and wherever he looked his eyes found sheep fur scattered all over the place.
Oct 28, 2012 2:41 PM #771418
[COLOR=#333333]As the sun rose, Alby rode down the long deserted highway on his bicycle. [/COLOR][COLOR=#333333]He slid to a stop when he noticed the road ahead had been blocked by a fallen tree. He realized that it was not hard to get around the fallen tree, so he went off-road on his bicycle. [/COLOR]Alby always loved riding through that place, looking at the tall trees and wild grass. He rode down that same road every morning, but this morning was different. The fallen trees were lying everywhere, and wherever he looked his eyes found sheep fur scattered all over the place. Off in the distance, he saw one remaining sheep, and he cycled over in that direction.
Oct 28, 2012 2:43 PM #771419
The sheep was shocked, it was afraid of Alby, the sheep had injuries on her torso.
Oct 28, 2012 3:06 PM #771437
In a Long Effort, the sheep finally got used to Alby
Oct 28, 2012 3:10 PM #771439
Alby was horrified by the injuries, so he had taken the sheep with him to visit Uncle Frank.
Oct 28, 2012 3:19 PM #771448
Along the way they met a puppy that had lost it's way...
Oct 28, 2012 3:22 PM #771452
Alby couldnt resist ignoring the poor creauture, so he took the puppy with him, he looked funny as he had a sheep under one of his armpits and puppy on the other.