Rock, Jump, Face :/ Splat

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Started by: Vile | Replies: 1 | Views: 371

Vile

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Nov 5, 2012 1:54 AM #778622

Well, just a warmup. Second post on Stickpage etc etc, could someone give me some tips I'm looking to improve.

http://www.fileize.com/view/7e840f03-66d/

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Nov 5, 2012 2:24 PM #778968

The jump looks un-natural.